Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Try to correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For instance, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lifts my mood. Moreover, it strengthens our relationship by keeping us connected.

제안: Your answer covers the topic but has some grammatical mistakes and lacks linking words. Use plural forms correctly and connect your ideas with appropriate linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. We often share funny stories and also discuss recent movies and music we enjoy. Because we talk about common interests, it helps us stay connected and strengthens our bond.

제안: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one person because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. When talking one-to-one, it is easier to focus on the person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a stronger connection. For example, I often find that I can share personal experiences and feel more comfortable in a private setting.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct expressions and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it is much more genuine and effective. When talking in person, you can read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For example, discussing important matters is usually clearer and more personal when done face-to-face.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Use plural forms correctly and connect your ideas with appropriate linking words for better flow.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting conversations rather than conflicts.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friend because I it help me relax and share my thoughts.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friend because it helps me relax and share my thoughts.

The pronoun 'I it' is incorrect and redundant. The correct subject is 'it' referring to 'chatting', which is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject.

× For example, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lift my mood.

✓ For example, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lifts my mood.

The subject 'talking' is singular, so the verb should be 'lifts' to agree with the singular subject.

× It also strengthen our relationship by keeping us connected.

✓ It also strengthens our relationship by keeping us connected.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'strengthens' to agree with the singular subject.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, works or hobbies.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work or hobbies.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is an uncountable noun referring to tasks or jobs, so the singular form 'work' should be used.

× We often share funny stories but discuss recent movie and music we enjoy.

✓ We often share funny stories but discuss recent movies and music we enjoy.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the plural context, and 'discuss' is correct as it agrees with the plural subject 'we'.

× Talking about a common interest help us to stay connected and strengthen our affinity.

✓ Talking about a common interest helps us to stay connected and strengthens our affinity.

The subject 'Talking' is singular, so the verbs should be 'helps' and 'strengthens' to agree with the singular subject.

× I prefer chatting with only one person because it allow allows for deeper, deeper and more meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one person because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversation.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows'. Also, the word 'deeper' is repeated unnecessarily and should appear only once.

× When talking one to one, it is easier to focus on the person feelings and thought which help build a stronger connection.

✓ When talking one to one, it is easier to focus on the person's feelings and thoughts which help build a stronger connection.

The phrase 'person feelings and thought' lacks possessive form and plural agreement. It should be 'person's feelings and thoughts' to indicate possession and plural nouns.

× For example, I often find that I can share personal experience and more comfortable in a private setting.

✓ For example, I often find that I can share personal experiences and feel more comfortable in a private setting.

The noun 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context, and the verb 'feel' is needed before 'more comfortable' to complete the sentence.

× I prefer communication face to face because she's a lot more genuine and effective intellect.

✓ I prefer communication face to face because it's a lot more genuine and effective intellectually.

The pronoun 'she's' is incorrect here; it should be 'it's' referring to 'communication'. Also, 'intellect' should be the adverb 'intellectually' to modify 'effective'.

× When talking in person you can read body language and facial expression which helps to helps avoid misunderstandings.

✓ When talking in person, you can read body language and facial expressions which help to avoid misunderstandings.

A comma is needed after 'in person' for clarity. 'Facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match 'body language'. Also, 'helps to helps' is redundant; it should be 'help to' because the plural subject requires plural verb.

× For example. Discussing important matter is usually clearer and more personal when done face to face.

✓ For example, discussing important matters is usually clearer and more personal when done face to face.

The period after 'For example' should be a comma. 'Important matter' should be plural 'important matters' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinion on important topics.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics.

The noun 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to agree with 'different' and the plural subject 'we'.

× However, disagreement are usually brief and help us understand each other better.

✓ However, disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better.

The noun 'disagreement' should be plural 'disagreements' to agree with the plural verb 'are'.

× For example, we might debate about movie or current event, which often leads to interesting conversations rather than conflicts.

✓ For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often lead to interesting conversations rather than conflicts.

The nouns 'movie' and 'current event' should be plural 'movies' and 'current events' to match the plural context. Also, 'leads' should be 'lead' to agree with the plural subject.