Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my experiences and feelings. For instance, when I have a problem, talking to them helps me feel better.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng từ không đúng ngữ cảnh như "upgrade my beauties" hay "shoot from us". Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ nghĩa và có liên kết logic.

예시: We usually talk about shopping and makeup because we want to improve our appearance. For example, we buy different makeup products and try them to see which suits us best.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều/số ít và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer to talk with one friend because I am shy and don't like sharing my stories with many people. For example, I only share my feelings with my best friend.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng nên dùng từ vựng đa dạng hơn và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me express my feelings more clearly. Moreover, it strengthens our relationships.

제안: Bạn bị nhầm lẫn giữa "agree" và "argue". Hãy dùng từ đúng nghĩa và chú ý ngữ pháp thì hiện tại và quá khứ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có liên kết và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, when I get angry, I stay quiet to avoid damaging our relationship.

× Yes, of course I love chatting with my friends because I can share my experience, stories and about my feeling and for example if I have a problem I will shares my story with my friends to express my feeling and it's also can make me feel better.

✓ Yes, of course I love chatting with my friends because I can share my experiences, stories, and my feelings. For example, if I have a problem, I will share my story with my friends to express my feelings, and it can also make me feel better.

The verb 'shares' is incorrectly used in the present tense third person singular form after 'I will'. After 'will', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'shares' should be 'share'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved by splitting into clearer sentences.

× Yes, of course I love chatting with my friends because I can share my experience, stories and about my feeling and for example if I have a problem I will shares my story with my friends to express my feeling and it's also can make me feel better.

✓ Yes, of course I love chatting with my friends because I can share my experiences, stories, and my feelings. For example, if I have a problem, I will share my story with my friends to express my feelings, and it can also make me feel better.

The nouns 'experience' and 'feeling' should be plural ('experiences' and 'feelings') because the speaker refers to multiple instances or types of these.

× Well, we often talk about shopping and makeup because, uh, we want to upgrade my beauties and also can make others more better. For example, we will buy a lot of makeup and then we try another to make sure it's shoot from us.

✓ Well, we often talk about shopping and makeup because, uh, we want to improve our beauty and also make others look better. For example, we buy a lot of makeup and then try different products to make sure they suit us.

The phrase 'upgrade my beauties' is incorrect; 'improve our beauty' is more appropriate. 'More better' is redundant; 'better' alone suffices. 'Try another' is unclear; 'try different products' is clearer. 'Shoot from us' is incorrect; 'suit us' is the correct expression.

× Well, I think I would like to talk with one friends because I'm shy and I don't want to say my story with many friends.

✓ Well, I think I would like to talk with one friend because I'm shy and I don't want to share my story with many friends.

'One friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun; it should be 'one friend'. Also, 'say my story' is better expressed as 'share my story'.

× For example, I just tell my best friend about my spirit, not the other friends.

✓ For example, I just tell my best friend about my feelings, not the other friends.

The word 'spirit' is not appropriate here; 'feelings' better conveys the intended meaning. The pronoun usage is correct.

× Absolutely face to face because I can express my feeling better and also can communicate with my friends clearly and we also improve our relationships to make it better.

✓ Absolutely face-to-face because I can express my feelings better and also communicate with my friends clearly, and we also improve our relationships to make them better.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. 'Make it better' should be 'make them better' to refer to 'relationships' (plural).

× Yes I do, I often agree with my friends because we don't have the same mindset and the same thing.

✓ Yes, I do. I often disagree with my friends because we don't have the same mindset or opinions.

The student likely meant 'disagree' instead of 'agree' given the context. 'The same thing' is vague; 'opinions' or 'views' is clearer. Also, a comma and period are added for clarity.

× So when I was angry I will be quiet to make sure our relationships not be broke.

✓ So when I am angry, I will be quiet to make sure our relationship is not broken.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with future tense 'will be'; it should be consistent. 'Relationships' should be singular 'relationship' to match the context. 'Not be broke' is incorrect; it should be 'is not broken'.