Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas into one clear sentence. For example, instead of repeating 'chat with my friends' and 'share feelings', you can say 'I enjoy chatting with close friends to relieve stress and share my daily experiences.'

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with close friends during my free time because it helps me relieve stress and share my daily experiences easily.

제안: Focus on clarity and avoid filler words. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. For example, mention specific topics you discuss and explain why you find sharing these topics satisfying.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my feelings and daily activities because sharing these helps me feel relieved and satisfied.

제안: Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with your preference and then explain why, using words like 'because' or 'since'.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to share my feelings and opinions more easily than in a group.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'adaptive for me' and 'posters'. Use clear vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear preference and reasons. For example, explain why face-to-face communication is more effective.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see gestures and expressions, which helps convey messages more effectively than social media.

제안: Reduce filler words and repetition. Use linking words to explain your point clearly. For example, state that you sometimes argue with friends to share opinions, but these arguments are constructive.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with close friends to share my opinions, but these arguments are always positive and help us understand each other better.

× if I'm stressed with, uh, from my hectic schedule

✓ if I'm stressed from my hectic schedule

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express the cause of stress is 'from'. Therefore, 'stressed from my hectic schedule' is correct.

× to share my daily, uh, routine life as well

✓ to share my daily routine as well

The phrase 'routine life' is awkward and incorrect. The word 'routine' alone suffices to describe daily activities. Also, 'daily routine' is a common collocation, so 'daily routine' is preferred.

× to share feelings, uh, with each other

✓ to share feelings with each other

The phrase is correct but the comma before 'with' is unnecessary and interrupts the flow. Removing the comma improves clarity.

× There are many areas, uh, where I usually chat about my friends

✓ There are many topics about which I usually chat with my friends

The phrase 'chat about my friends' is ambiguous and likely incorrect. The intended meaning is probably 'chat with my friends about many topics'. Also, 'areas' is not the best word here; 'topics' is more appropriate.

× the most, uh, uh, uh, popular I do is to share my feelings and my, uh, whole routine life as well

✓ the most popular thing I do is share my feelings and my whole routine life as well

The phrase 'the most popular I do' is ungrammatical. It should be 'the most popular thing I do'. Also, 'share' does not need 'to' here.

× sharing it gives me relief and a kind of satisfaction after sharing it with my friend

✓ sharing it gives me relief and a kind of satisfaction after sharing it with my friends

The singular 'my friend' is inconsistent with the plural context. Since the student chats with multiple friends, 'my friends' is more appropriate.

× From my opinion, I personally believe that chatting with only one friend instead of chatting with a group of people is very much beneficial

✓ In my opinion, I personally believe that chatting with only one friend instead of chatting with a group of people is very beneficial

The phrase 'From my opinion' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'In my opinion'. Also, 'very much beneficial' is awkward; 'very beneficial' is better.

× I think that I can easily share my feelings and my opinions and views about particular point or thing can easily rather than just to chat with the group of people

✓ I think that I can easily share my feelings and my opinions and views about a particular point or thing more easily rather than just chatting with a group of people

The sentence is awkward and has preposition and verb form issues. 'About particular point' needs an article 'a'. 'Can easily' should be followed by the verb in base form or gerund. 'Rather than just to chat' is incorrect; 'rather than just chatting' is correct.

× I usually prefer to communicate face to face rather than on social media platforms

✓ I usually prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media platforms

The preposition 'on' is less appropriate here; 'via' or 'through' is better to indicate communication medium.

× having a face to face conversations is very much effective

✓ having face-to-face conversations is very effective

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Also, 'a face to face conversations' is incorrect because 'conversations' is plural; remove 'a'. 'Very much effective' is awkward; 'very effective' is better.

× And also it shows our gestures and posters as well and what we are trying to convey

✓ And also it shows our gestures and postures as well as what we are trying to convey

The word 'posters' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'postures' which refers to body language. Also, 'and what we are trying to convey' should be connected properly with 'as well as'.

× if there is a, uh, if there is an topic about argument

✓ if there is a topic about an argument

The article 'an' is incorrectly used before 'topic' which starts with a consonant sound; it should be 'a topic'. Also, 'argument' is a countable noun and needs an article; 'an argument' is correct.