Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Avoid confusing or irrelevant words like 'hunting' if you mean 'chatting'. Use simple and correct grammar, and keep your answer natural and concise. For example, say: "Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my problems with them."

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my problems with them.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to make your sentences clear and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say: "I usually chat about my daily life, and my friends also share their experiences with me."

예시: I usually chat about my daily life, and my friends also share their experiences with me.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. For example: "I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can trust them and talk deeply about my problems."

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can trust them and talk deeply about my problems.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct phrases and grammar. Instead of 'communicate first to first', say 'communicate face-to-face'. Also, explain your reason clearly. For example: "I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can express myself clearly and calmly."

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can express myself clearly and calmly.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your ideas. For example: "Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but we also agree on many things."

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but we also agree on many things.

× Yes, I enjoyed hunting with my friend because it helped me relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day.

The question is about liking chatting in general, so the present tense should be used instead of past tense. 'Enjoyed' and 'helped' are past tense, but the context requires present tense 'enjoy' and 'helps' to express habitual action.

× Talking with them allow me to talk about my problem that I have.

✓ Talking with them allows me to talk about the problems that I have.

The subject 'Talking' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' not 'allow'. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'that I have' which implies multiple issues.

× They can so they can so so they can help me solve it and it carry those me some stress.

✓ They can help me solve them and it carries away some of my stress.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. Corrected sentence clarifies meaning and fixes verb agreement: 'carries' agrees with singular 'it', and 'them' refers to problems. 'Carry those me some stress' is incorrect structure.

× I usually chat about my life that how my life going from day-to-day and they also chat with me with they also chat with me about their lives.

✓ I usually chat about how my life is going day-to-day, and they also chat with me about their lives.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Corrected sentence removes repetition and uses correct verb form 'is going' for present continuous tense.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because when I type it only one friend we can we can talk deep to my problem, I can trust them, just that I can talk about my problem more.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because when I talk to only one friend, we can talk deeply about my problems. I can trust them and talk more about my problems.

The original sentence has repetition and incorrect phrases like 'talk deep to my problem'. Corrected sentence uses 'talk deeply about my problems' and improves clarity and grammar.

× Umm, I prefer communicate first to first because I can talk without confusing them.

✓ Umm, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can talk without confusing them.

The phrase 'communicate first to first' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'communicate face-to-face' to express direct communication.

× I can't talk calmly, telling them about my problem, telling them about my life.

✓ I can talk calmly, telling them about my problems and my life.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'I can't talk calmly' but then describes calmly telling. Corrected sentence aligns with intended meaning of calm communication.

× Sometime I do, I go with my friend about something like we has, uh, we has uh, different opinions.

✓ Sometimes I do. I argue with my friend about things because we have different opinions.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (plural adverb). 'I go with my friend' is incorrect; 'I argue with my friend' fits context. 'We has' is incorrect; 'we have' is correct plural verb form.

× Sometimes we agree about the opinion that, that we have different from each other.

✓ Sometimes we agree even though we have different opinions from each other.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Corrected sentence clarifies that despite differences, they sometimes agree.