Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымын жақсартып, артық қайталанатын сөздерді азайтыңыз. Мысалы, 'I really love to chat with my friends because I can gossip with them about everything' дегенді қысқаша және нақты етіп айтуға болады. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді 5-тен аспайтын етіп қысқарту керек.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated about school news and share interesting information. It's also a great way to relax and spend time at home.

제안: Жауабыңызда нақты және дұрыс сөздерді қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'new informations' орнына 'new information' деп айту керек, себебі 'information' санаулы зат емес. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстырып, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз.

예시: We usually chat about school news, interesting things people say, and sometimes about our personal worries or family issues.

제안: Жауабыңызды нақты және түсінікті етіп құрыңыз. Мысалы, 'talking in the direct messages' дегенді 'chatting via direct messages' деп айту дұрыс болады. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді қысқартып, байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

예시: It depends on the situation. I prefer chatting in direct messages when it's a big group with people I'm not close to, but I enjoy small group chats with trusted friends because it's more comfortable.

제안: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателерді түзетіңіз және сөйлемдерді қысқартыңыз. Мысалы, 'this question make me think hard' орнына 'this question makes me think hard' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, байланыстыру сөздерін қолданып, жауапты логикалық етіп жасаңыз.

예시: This question makes me think because I am an introverted person. Face-to-face communication is good for reading emotions, but social media is comfortable since I can express myself without shyness.

제안: Жауабыңызды нақты және қысқа етіп айтыңыз. Мысалы, 'there is even a one person on this world' дегенді 'there is no one in the world' деп айту дұрыс болады. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді байланыстырып, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз.

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends. I believe everyone argues sometimes because it's natural, and I don't think it's necessarily bad or rude.

× I really love to chat with my friends because I can gossip with them about everything, about some news in my school and something interesting information.

✓ I really love to chat with my friends because I can gossip with them about everything, about some news in my school and some interesting information.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'something'. Instead, use 'some' to correctly quantify uncountable nouns in English.

× And also it's best way to me to spend time at home, it's to chat with my friends.

✓ And also it's the best way for me to spend time at home, which is to chat with my friends.

The phrase 'best way to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when indicating purpose or suitability. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× one of our main topics of chatting is gossiping, talking about new informations in our school, someone's interesting words, provocating and except of these topics, maybe it's something about our worries, family situations and arguments with relatives.

✓ one of our main topics of chatting is gossiping, talking about new information in our school, someone's interesting words, provoking, and except for these topics, maybe it's something about our worries, family situations and arguments with relatives.

'Informations' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not have a plural form. Also, 'provocating' is not a correct form; 'provoking' is the correct present participle. The phrase 'except of' should be 'except for'.

× If we talk about big groups where a lot of people that I'm not close with, of course I would choose talking in the direct messages.

✓ If we talk about big groups where there are a lot of people that I'm not close with, of course I would choose talking in direct messages.

The sentence is missing 'there are' to correctly express existence in the clause. Also, 'in the direct messages' should be 'in direct messages' as the definite article is unnecessary here.

× But if it's small group that is made and consists only people that I trust, like for three or four people, then I don't mind them because it's more comfortable to.

✓ But if it's a small group that is made up of and consists only of people that I trust, like three or four people, then I don't mind because it's more comfortable too.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'small group'. The phrase 'made and consists only people' is incorrect; it should be 'made up of and consists only of people'. Also, 'like for three or four people' is better as 'like three or four people'. The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and 'to' should be 'too'.

× So this question make me think hard because I'm absolutely introverted person and both of these ways of communicating is is acceptable for me.

✓ So this question makes me think hard because I'm an absolutely introverted person and both of these ways of communicating are acceptable for me.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'question'. 'Is is' is a repetition error; it should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'both of these ways'. Also, 'an' is needed before 'absolutely'.

× Face to face is convenient because you can feel changes in facial expressions and emotions of your opponent but still via social media is comfortable because you can say what you think without being shy.

✓ Face to face communication is convenient because you can feel changes in facial expressions and emotions of your opponent, but still, communicating via social media is comfortable because you can say what you think without being shy.

The phrase 'Face to face' should be 'Face to face communication' for clarity. Also, 'via social media is comfortable' is awkward; adding 'communicating' clarifies the meaning. A comma is needed before 'but still'.

× I don't think that there is even a one person on this world who doesn't argue with their friends, family members, or someone else because it's our nature to have an argument with our surrounding.

✓ I don't think that there is even one person in this world who doesn't argue with their friends, family members, or someone else because it's our nature to have arguments with our surroundings.

The phrase 'a one person' is incorrect; 'one person' is correct. 'On this world' should be 'in this world'. 'An argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match the general statement. 'Our surrounding' should be plural 'our surroundings'.