Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, instead of 'lift my mood', say 'lifts my mood'. Also, 'allowing us to understood' should be 'helps us understand'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For example, after visiting a place, talking with friends about our experiences always lifts my mood. It also helps us understand each other better and strengthens our relationship.

제안: Your answer has some vocabulary and grammar mistakes. For example, 'Wayne often share my funny stories' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. For instance, we often share funny stories and discuss recent movies and music we enjoy. This helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

제안: There are several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. For example, 'only one friends' should be 'only one friend', and 'convention conversation' is unclear. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on the other person's thoughts and feelings, which helps build stronger connections.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect word choices. For example, 'iteration' should be 'interaction', and the sentence about reading body language is unclear. Try to write clear and grammatically correct sentences with proper linking words.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. In person, I can read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

제안: There are grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, 'I give with friends' is incorrect; use 'I argue with friends'. Also, use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow with linking words.

예시: Yes, occasionally I argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often lead to interesting discussions rather than conflicts.

× after visiting, talking with friends about our experience always lift my mood

✓ after visiting, talking with friends about our experience always lifts my mood

The verb 'lift' should be in the third person singular form 'lifts' to agree with the singular subject 'talking with friends about our experience'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I also secure our relationship by allowing us to understood to each other better

✓ I also secure our relationship by allowing us to understand each other better

The verb 'understood' is incorrectly used here; the base form 'understand' should be used after 'to' as it is an infinitive verb form.

× Wayne often share my funny stories, discuss recent movie and music we enjoy

✓ Wayne often shares my funny stories, discusses recent movies and music we enjoy

The verbs 'share' and 'discuss' should be in third person singular form 'shares' and 'discusses' to agree with the singular subject 'Wayne'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the context.

× I prefer chatting with only one friends because I allows for deeper and more meaningful convention conversation

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversation

'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'one'. 'I allows' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows' referring to 'chatting'. 'convention conversation' is incorrect; 'meaningful conversation' is correct.

× When talking one-on-one, it's easy to focus on the other person thought and feelings which helps build and stronger connections

✓ When talking one-on-one, it's easy to focus on the other person's thoughts and feelings which helps build stronger connections

The possessive form 'person's' is needed to show ownership of 'thoughts and feelings'. 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts'. 'and stronger connections' should be 'stronger connections' without 'and'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective iteration, interaction in person conversation, unable to read body language and spatial expression which helps avoid misunderstandings

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction in person, enabling me to read body language and spatial expressions which helps avoid misunderstandings

'iteration' is incorrect; it should be 'interaction'. 'interaction in person conversation' is awkward; rephrased to 'interaction in person'. 'unable to read' is incorrect; should be 'enabling me to read'. 'spatial expression' should be plural 'spatial expressions'.

× Yes, occasionally I give with friends, specially when we are different opinion on important topic

✓ Yes, occasionally I argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics

'give with friends' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'argue'. 'specially' should be 'especially'. 'are different opinion' should be 'have different opinions'. 'important topic' should be plural 'important topics'.

× However, this argument are usually friendly and help us understand each other better

✓ However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better

'argument' is singular but 'are' is plural; should be plural 'arguments' to agree with 'are'.

× For example, we might debate about movie or current event, which often lead to interesting discuss rather than conflicts

✓ For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often lead to interesting discussions rather than conflicts

'movie' and 'current event' should be plural 'movies' and 'current events' to match the plural context. 'discuss' should be 'discussions' as a noun.