Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и неполных предложений. Используйте связки для плавности речи.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. I usually talk to them every day, either by phone or through messaging apps.

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и логичным. Используйте связующие слова и уточняйте детали, чтобы сделать ответ понятным и полным.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about how they spend their time and their daily lives. Sometimes, I also ask about their family, like how their mother is doing.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и завершённым. Избегайте незаконченных предложений и добавьте связующие слова для плавности.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because I have many friends and enjoy learning about their lives. However, I also have a best friend whom I talk to every day and night.

제안: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Используйте связки и уточнения для ясности.

예시: If I don't know the person well, I prefer to communicate via social media at first. After chatting for a few days and getting to know them better, I feel comfortable meeting face-to-face.

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и без пауз. Используйте правильную грамматику и объясните причину.

예시: Yes, I rarely argue with my friends. It usually happens only when our opinions differ significantly.

× I chatting with my friends every day and also I call them and.

✓ I chat with my friends every day and also I call them.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base form 'chat' to match the present simple tense. The phrase 'and also I call them and' is incomplete and redundant; it should be 'and also I call them.'

× I chatting with my friends every day and also I call them and.

✓ I chat with my friends every day and also I call them.

The sentence is incomplete and has an unnecessary conjunction 'and' at the end, which makes it grammatically incorrect. Removing the extra 'and' and correcting the verb form improves clarity.

× Usually I chat about how they spend their time, how their life and also I have a date.

✓ Usually I chat about how they spend their time, how their life is, and also about my date.

The phrase 'how their life' is incomplete and needs a verb 'is' to be correct. Also, 'I have a date' is unclear in this context; it should be 'about my date' to indicate the topic of conversation.

× I'm making a date for this friends but sometimes I ask for their mom.

✓ I'm making a date with these friends but sometimes I ask about their mom.

The phrase 'making a date for this friends' is incorrect; it should be 'making a date with these friends' to indicate arranging a meeting. Also, 'ask for their mom' should be 'ask about their mom' to correctly express inquiring about someone.

× How their mom?

✓ How is their mom?

The sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'is' forms a proper question about the condition of their mom.

× I prefer to chat with the group because I have a lot of friends and I'm very friendly.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group because I have a lot of friends and I'm very friendly.

Using 'the group' implies a specific group known to both speaker and listener, but here it is general, so 'a group' is appropriate.

× I like to know their lives.

✓ I like to know about their lives.

The verb 'know' usually requires a preposition 'about' when referring to someone's lives or experiences.

× But I have one best friend and I always chat with her every day, every night, every.

✓ But I have one best friend and I always chat with her every day and every night.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'every' which is incomplete. Adding 'and every night' completes the phrase properly.

× Well, if the person unknown, I prefer to via social media to to chatting some days and after that communicate face to face because I don't know what everything, not everything but some little bit about that person.

✓ Well, if the person is unknown, I prefer to use social media to chat some days and after that communicate face to face because I don't know everything, only a little bit about that person.

The sentence has multiple errors: missing verb 'is' after 'person', incorrect preposition 'to via' should be 'to use', 'to chatting' should be 'to chat', and awkward phrasing 'I don't know what everything' corrected to 'I don't know everything'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, but rarely uh, for example if uh, if our opinion don't the same maybe.

✓ Yes, but rarely. For example, if our opinions are not the same, maybe.

The modal verb 'don't' is incorrectly used with 'opinion' which should be plural 'opinions' and the verb 'are' is needed for subject-verb agreement. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs punctuation for clarity.