Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'chatting with friends' twice and try to use varied vocabulary. Also, limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences to keep it effective.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends a lot. I usually spend a good amount of time each day talking to them, either online or in person.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech more fluent. Also, use correct grammar and linking words to organise your ideas clearly. For example, say 'The subjects we talk about range from...' and use linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' to list topics.

예시: The subjects we usually talk about range from everyday things, such as what to eat, to future plans and places we'd like to travel.

제안: Avoid hesitation sounds and be more confident in your answer. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with a group because it inspires me and leads to more interesting topics.'

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it inspires me and often leads to more interesting conversations.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains many filler words and some grammar mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words like 'because' and 'which' correctly. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to connect more closely and see facial expressions, which helps the conversation flow more smoothly.

제안: Try to organise your answer more clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically. For example, say 'I do argue sometimes because I believe that arguing can help solve problems if done respectfully.'

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes. I believe that arguing can be helpful because it allows us to solve problems and understand each other better, as long as it's respectful.

× the subject we talked about range from, uh, different, uh, part like, uh, what to eat or what do you want to do in the future and also, uh, the places we wanted to travel.

✓ the subjects we talked about range from, uh, different, uh, parts like, uh, what to eat or what you want to do in the future and also, uh, the places we wanted to travel.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple topics. Similarly, 'part' should be plural 'parts' to match the plural context. This is a singular and plural issue where countable nouns must agree in number with their context.

× more people gives me more inspiration and it can trigger more interesting subjects topics.

✓ more people give me more inspiration and it can trigger more interesting subjects topics.

The subject 'more people' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives' to agree in number. This is a third person singular issue involving subject-verb agreement.

× I can see others face facial expression more easily.

✓ I can see others' facial expressions more easily.

The phrase 'others face facial expression' is incorrect. It should be 'others' facial expressions' to show possession and correct plural form. Also, 'facial expression' should be plural 'expressions' to match the context. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and possessive form.

× Umm, which uh, help us to communicate more fluently.

✓ Umm, which, uh, helps us to communicate more fluently.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to a singular subject, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. The sentence structure requires subject-verb agreement here.