Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但部分表达略显重复，如“I think”多次出现，且“daily stressor”用词不够地道。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve the stress from my studies and work. Whenever we talk, I feel relaxed and comfortable, which improves my mood and strengthens our relationships.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达有些混乱，且存在语法错误和口语化填充词（如“you know”）过多。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词，使用更准确的词汇表达具体内容。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my daily life, including presentations and team projects. We also discuss interesting people or events that catch our attention.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，存在语法错误。建议完整表达观点，避免口语填充词，使用连贯的句子结构。

예시: I usually prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more personal and allows for deeper conversations. However, sometimes I enjoy group chats for a more lively atmosphere.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在重复词汇（如“true true”）和语法小错误。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand others' feelings better. Body language and facial expressions convey a lot of information that social media cannot.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和口语填充词，句子结构不够流畅。建议减少重复和填充词，使用更正式和连贯的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I sometimes have small disagreements with my friends. However, we usually communicate openly and peacefully to resolve any issues.

× I think it's a good way for me to escape from my daily stressor of my study and work.

✓ I think it's a good way for me to escape from my daily stressors of my study and work.

这里的'stressor'应该用复数形式'stressors'，因为指的是多种压力源。英语中表示多个事物时需要用复数形式。

× Usually I talk with my friends about my daily life such as my presentation, my team projects, my progressions and also I chat with my friends some you know some special peoples or things.

✓ Usually I talk with my friends about my daily life such as my presentation, my team projects, my progress, and also I chat with my friends about some, you know, special people or things.

'progressions'应改为不可数名词'progress'，'peoples'应改为复数名词'people'，因为'people'本身就是复数形式。

× and also I chat with my friends some you know some special peoples or things.

✓ and also I chat with my friends about some, you know, special people or things.

动词'chat'后面应接介词'about'表示谈论某事。缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Well, usually I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel it's more personal and more deeply.

✓ Well, usually I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel it's more personal and deeper.

'deeply'是副词，修饰动词；这里需要形容词'deeper'来修饰主语的感受。

× Also, sometimes I think talking with a group of friends is.

✓ Also, sometimes I think talking with a group of friends is better.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清晰。需要补充完整的谓语。

× Actually, I prefer to communicate to face to face because when you talk with other people face to face, you can feel their feelings and you know their true true meanings.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because when you talk with other people face to face, you can feel their feelings and, you know, their true meanings.

'communicate'后不接介词'to'，直接用'communicate face to face'。另外，'true true meanings'重复，应去掉一个'true'。

× Usually we will communicate with other openly and peacefully and solve this this disagreement.

✓ Usually we will communicate with each other openly and peacefully and solve this disagreement.

'communicate with other'应为'reciprocal pronoun'形式'each other'，表示彼此之间。重复的'this'应去掉一个。