Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Thank you' in your answer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is fun and helps us strengthen our friendship. For example, we often talk during breaks at school, which also helps us learn new things from each other.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Avoid repeating words and try to give specific examples. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

예시: I usually chat about sports and online gaming. For instance, I discuss football and basketball players with my friends, and we also plan strategies for online games we enjoy playing together.

제안: Your answer is clear but has some hesitation and repetition. Try to speak more fluently and avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are more topics to discuss, which makes the conversation more interesting and fun compared to talking with just one person.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more concise.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and comfortable. Moreover, it avoids issues like internet lag, which can disrupt conversations on social media.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, focus on giving a concise reason for not arguing.

예시: No, I do not argue with my friends because it can damage our friendship. I believe it is important to maintain good relationships by resolving conflicts calmly.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend because chatting with with friends are fun.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because chatting with friends is fun.

The subject 'chatting with friends' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple friends.

× Chatting with friends improve our friendship and knowledge.

✓ Chatting with friends improves our friendship and knowledge.

The subject 'Chatting with friends' is singular, so the verb should be 'improves' (third person singular) instead of 'improve'.

× I usually talk about about sports and online gaming. In sports I talk about football player, football, basketball, basketball player and in online gaming I talk about games, online games, games and planning of games, games like.

✓ I usually talk about sports and online gaming. In sports, I talk about football players, football, basketball, basketball players, and in online gaming, I talk about games, online games, and planning of games.

'Football player' and 'basketball player' should be plural 'football players' and 'basketball players' to match the plural context. Also, repeated words like 'about about' and 'games' are redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× if you talk with only one people, they, they, there will be fewer topics to talk about.

✓ if you talk with only one person, there will be fewer topics to talk about.

'People' is plural, so it cannot be used with 'one'. The correct singular noun is 'person'. Also, redundant words like 'they, they' should be removed.

× But if you talk in a group of people, there will be so many topics to talk about and you will, and there will be more, more fun.

✓ But if you talk in a group of people, there will be many topics to talk about and there will be more fun.

The phrase 'so many' is acceptable but 'so many topics' is better than 'so many topics to talk about and you will, and there will be more, more fun' which is redundant and awkward. Simplifying improves clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we will feel personal and we will feel more comfortable and there will be no Internet lag and other lags while we are talking face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we feel more personal and comfortable, and there will be no Internet lag or other lags while we are talking face-to-face.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective. Also, 'feel personal' is awkward; 'feel more personal' is better expressed as 'feel more personal connection' or simply 'feel more comfortable'. The sentence is improved by adding conjunctions and correcting prepositions.

× No, I do not argue with friends because if I argue with my friends there will be no friendship left.

✓ No, I do not argue with friends because if I argue with my friends, there will be no friendship left.

A comma is needed after 'friends' to separate clauses properly. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× Our all friendship will be.

✓ All our friendship will be gone.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a verb and object. The corrected sentence completes the thought and improves clarity.

× There will be no friends for me.

✓ There will be no friends left for me.

Adding 'left' clarifies the meaning. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× All of them will think think I am rude and teachers will also hate me.

✓ All of them will think I am rude, and teachers will also hate me.

The repeated word 'think' is a typo and should be removed. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses.