Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'you can talk to them anywhere and anytime you want', you can say 'they allow me to chat with friends anytime, anywhere.' Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, definitely. I find messenger apps extremely useful because they're user-friendly and allow me to chat with friends anytime, anywhere.

제안: Avoid repeating the same idea twice and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'which helps' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the platforms or the way you discuss lessons.

예시: Most of my friends are from university, so we usually chat about upcoming exams and lessons. For example, we use messaging platforms to discuss difficult topics, which helps us prepare better for exams.

제안: Your answer repeats the previous response and does not directly address the question. Make sure to answer the question clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to organize your answer.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it allows us to share ideas and help each other with university lessons, especially when preparing for exams.

제안: Your answer is good but incomplete at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see a person's body language and emotions. For example, I can tell if someone is happy or sad, which is difficult through messages alone.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and avoid unnecessary words like 'just'.

예시: Yes, definitely. Sometimes we have different opinions which lead to arguments, but I think that's normal because it helps us understand each other better. We always try to control ourselves and respect each other's views.

× there are some messaging platforms that you can talk with your friends about your lessons and discuss about them

✓ there are some messaging platforms where you can talk to your friends about your lessons and discuss them

The preposition 'with' after 'talk' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect because 'discuss' is a transitive verb and does not require 'about'. Use 'discuss them' instead.

× I prefer face to face communication because it allows me to see persons body language or emotions

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see a person's body language or emotions

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Also, 'persons' should be the possessive form 'person's' to indicate possession of body language.

× I prefer face to face communication because it allows me to see persons body language or emotions

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see a person's body language or emotions

The word 'persons' is plural, but here it should be singular possessive 'person's' to correctly refer to the body language of one individual.

× But in chatting you have just the messages and.

✓ But when chatting, you only have the messages.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'when' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× we have to just control ourselves and respect to each other

✓ we just have to control ourselves and respect each other

The verb 'respect' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, the adverb 'just' is better placed before 'have to' for natural word order.