Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it could be more concise and avoid slight redundancy. Try to limit your response to around 4-5 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my feelings and get support when I'm stressed or excited. Moreover, talking to them is a great way to relax and stay connected, especially if I have something important to discuss.

제안: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and ends abruptly. Also, avoid filler words like 'well' and try to finish your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a complete, specific response.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my studies, hobbies, and interests. For instance, we often discuss the latest movies and music we enjoy. Additionally, we talk about trends on social media, which helps me stay updated with what's popular.

제안: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains some unclear phrasing ('often general support'). Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

예시: It depends on the situation. When I feel lonely, I prefer chatting with a big group of friends because it's lively and uplifting. However, if I need to confide in someone, I usually talk to one close friend since it feels more personal and supportive.

제안: Your answer is mostly clear but contains some incomplete and awkward phrases ('Social media well', 'social media can sometimes feel in person'). Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to compare the two methods effectively.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for more meaningful conversations. For example, you can read facial expressions and body language, which helps you understand your friends better. In contrast, social media sometimes feels less personal and can lead to misunderstandings.

제안: Your answer is clear, relevant, and well-structured. To improve further, you could use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have differing opinions on social issues or hobbies. Nevertheless, I believe these disagreements are beneficial because they help us understand each other better and ultimately strengthen our friendship.

× I find these conversations interesting because they help me stay updated and.

✓ I find these conversations interesting because they help me stay updated.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is a conjunction requiring an additional clause. This results in an incomplete sentence. To correct it, remove the conjunction 'and' to complete the sentence properly.

× However, if I need someone to confide in and often general support, I usually choose to talk to just one close friend as it.

✓ However, if I need someone to confide in and often general support, I usually choose to talk to just one close friend because of that.

The phrase 'and often general support' is awkward and unclear. It likely intends to express 'and often need general support'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'as it' which is incomplete. Replacing 'as it' with 'because of that' clarifies the reason and completes the sentence. Additionally, adding 'need' after 'often' would improve clarity, but since only corrections matching the grammar problem list are allowed, the minimal correction is applied.

× Social media well, I definitely prefer to communicate with people face to face rather than through social media because it allows for more meaningful conversations.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer to communicate with people face to face rather than through social media because it allows for more meaningful conversations.

The phrase 'Social media well,' at the beginning is misplaced and causes confusion. Removing 'Social media' and starting with 'Well,' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× When talking in person, you can easily read your friends facial expressions and body language which helps you understand their feelings better.

✓ When talking in person, you can easily read your friends' facial expressions and body language, which helps you understand their feelings better.

The possessive form 'friends' requires an apostrophe to indicate that the facial expressions and body language belong to the friends. Also, a comma before 'which' is needed to separate the relative clause for clarity.

× On the other hand, social media can sometimes feel in person.

✓ On the other hand, social media can sometimes feel impersonal.

The phrase 'feel in person' is incorrect and does not make sense in context. The intended meaning is likely that social media can feel 'impersonal'. Replacing 'in person' with 'impersonal' corrects the sentence.

× For instance, we sometimes have the divergent views about social issues or different hobbies and interests.

✓ For instance, we sometimes have divergent views about social issues or different hobbies and interests.

The use of the definite article 'the' before 'divergent views' is incorrect here because 'divergent views' is a general plural noun phrase. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.