Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“chat some our daily life”应为“chat about our daily life”。建议加强语法基础，注意介词和冠词的正确使用，同时回答应更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, definitely. When we have dinner or lunch together, we usually chat about our daily lives, hobbies, and sometimes academic challenges.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“tried some thing about”不合适，应为“talk about”。内容重复且不连贯，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意单复数和时态的正确使用。

예시: I usually talk about our recent plans and academic challenges. Sometimes, we also discuss our relationships with others and topics related to social media, which I find interesting.

제안: 回答表达不够流畅，存在语法错误，如“make relax myself”应为“help me relax”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: To be honest, I'm an introverted person, so I prefer chatting with one friend. It helps me relax and feel calm. However, talking in a group can sometimes make me feel pressured because I worry about saying the wrong thing.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“depends the situation may be face to face”应为“it depends on the situation, but I prefer face-to-face communication”。建议注意句子结构和时态，使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I think it depends on the situation, but I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for deeper interaction. However, chatting on social media is more convenient and saves time, especially when we don't live in the same city.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，表达更明确。

예시: No, I usually don't argue with my friends. We communicate in a friendly way and share similar hobbies and opinions, so we rarely have disagreements.

× Especially when we have a dinner or lunch, we often chat some our daily life and our hobbies or our academic troubles.

✓ Especially when we have dinner or lunch, we often chat about our daily lives, our hobbies, or our academic troubles.

“a dinner or lunch”中“dinner”和“lunch”作为不可数名词，不需要冠词“a”；“chat some our daily life”中缺少介词“about”，且“daily life”应为复数形式“daily lives”以匹配复数主语。

× I often tried some thing about our daily life, like our recently plan or our academic challenges, and sometimes we often talk about our relationship with other peoples and we talk about some social media.

✓ I often try to talk about our daily life, like our recent plans or our academic challenges, and sometimes we talk about our relationships with other people and social media.

“I often tried”时态不符合习惯表达，应使用一般现在时“try”；“some thing”应为“something”；“recently plan”应为形容词“recent plans”；“other peoples”应为“other people”；“some social media”中“some”不合适，直接用“social media”。

× sometimes we often talk about our relationship with other peoples

✓ sometimes we often talk about our relationships with other people

“relationship”应为复数“relationships”以匹配复数主语；“peoples”错误，应为“people”。

× But if I talk with group of people, maybe give me some pressure and I will think if I talk something is wrong or right.

✓ But if I talk with a group of people, it may give me some pressure and I will think if what I say is wrong or right.

“group of people”前缺少冠词“a”；“maybe give me”缺少主语，应为“it may give me”；“talk something”表达不当，应为“what I say”。

× I think depends the situation may be face to face.

✓ I think it depends on the situation; it may be face to face.

“depends”后应加介词“on”；句子缺少主语“it”；“may be face to face”前应有主语。

× We don't need lived in the same city or same location.

✓ We don't need to live in the same city or the same location.

“need”后应接动词不定式“to live”；“lived”是过去式，不符合语境。

× No, to be honest, my friend and I communicate or chatting often friendly so we don't have some troubles about one thing, so usually I do.

✓ No, to be honest, my friend and I communicate or chat often in a friendly way, so we don't have troubles about anything; usually I don't.

“communicate or chatting”应统一时态和形式；“often friendly”应改为“often in a friendly way”；“some troubles about one thing”表达不自然，应为“troubles about anything”；“so usually I do”不明确，改为“usually I don't”。

× I didn't argue with my friends, we often have the same hobby and the same same advice.

✓ I don't argue with my friends; we often have the same hobbies and the same advice.

“didn't argue”时态不符合习惯表达，应使用一般现在时“don't argue”；“hobby”应为复数“hobbies”；“same same”重复，应去掉一个。