Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and slightly unclear. Try to start directly with your opinion and then add a brief reason. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my thoughts and feel supported.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about topics. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

예시: I usually chat about how we are feeling and share any stressful events that happened during the day, so we support each other.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct singular/plural forms. Try to be more concise.

예시: I prefer chatting with one close friend because loyalty and attentive listening are more valuable than group conversations.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains filler words. Clarify your preference and reasons clearly, and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better understanding through body language and tone, which social media lacks.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your approach to resolving conflicts more clearly.

예시: I rarely argue with friends, but when opinions differ, I try to find a solution that satisfies both of us to avoid conflicts.

× Sometimes we shares thing that we are in stress, what happens with us in a day.

✓ Sometimes we share things that we are stressed about, what happens to us in a day.

The pronoun 'we' requires the verb 'share' without 's' because 'we' is plural. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'In stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stressed about'. 'What happens with us' should be 'what happens to us' to use the correct preposition.

× Sometimes we shares thing that we are in stress, what happens with us in a day.

✓ Sometimes we share things that we are stressed about, what happens to us in a day.

The verb 'shares' is incorrect with the subject 'we' which is plural; it should be 'share'.

× So I chat a lot with my I.

✓ So I chat a lot with my friends.

The phrase 'with my I' is incorrect; it should be 'with my friends' to make sense in context.

× I completely shared everything with my friends, everything.

✓ I completely share everything with my friends, everything.

The verb tense should be present tense 'share' to match the ongoing action described.

× Well, I like to chat with only one friend because I think having a one friend in your life who is loyal, who listen to you is more important than having a group of people.

✓ Well, I like to chat with only one friend because I think having one friend in your life who is loyal, who listens to you is more important than having a group of people.

The phrase 'a one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend'. Also, 'who listen' should be 'who listens' to agree with singular 'friend'.

× Well, I like to chat with only one friend because I think having a one friend in your life who is loyal, who listen to you is more important than having a group of people.

✓ Well, I like to chat with only one friend because I think having one friend in your life who is loyal, who listens to you is more important than having a group of people.

The verb 'listen' should be 'listens' to agree with the singular subject 'friend'.

× So I only have my one closest friend with whom I share everything related to my life.

✓ So I only have my one closest friend with whom I share everything related to my life.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× What happens with me in a day about my stressful.

✓ What happens to me in a day about my stress.

The correct preposition is 'to' not 'with' in this context. 'Stressful' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'stress'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because in person the, uh, we can easily understand the people.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in person, we can easily understand people.

The article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here; 'people' is used in general sense. Also, the comma placement improves clarity.

× Then on the social media face to face, you can talk everything about them without any hesitations and things.

✓ Then on social media, face to face, you can talk about everything without any hesitation.

The phrase 'on the social media' should be 'on social media' without 'the'. 'Talk everything about them' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about everything'. 'Hesitations and things' is vague; 'hesitation' is sufficient.

× Not really, but sometimes it happens when you're uh, thinking is different from other person, your opinion is different from other.

✓ Not really, but sometimes it happens when your thinking is different from another person, your opinion is different from others'.

'You're thinking' should be 'your thinking' (possessive). 'Other person' should be 'another person'. 'Different from other' should be 'different from others' with possessive apostrophe.

× In some situation it happens, you argue, but uh, I try to find a solution that help both of us and we don't do a argument about anything.

✓ In some situations it happens, you argue, but I try to find a solution that helps both of us and we don't have an argument about anything.

'Situation' should be plural 'situations'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'solution'. 'Do a argument' is incorrect; it should be 'have an argument'.