Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: この回答は少し冗長で文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、簡潔にし、文法を正しく使いましょう。例えば、"I enjoy chatting with my friends every day, either in person or through social media. We often talk about our personal lives."のようにすると良いです。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day, either in person or through social media. We often talk about our personal lives and share our daily experiences.

제안: 回答が繰り返しや不自然な表現を含んでいます。具体的で簡潔な表現を使い、論理的に話を展開しましょう。例えば、"I usually talk about my daily activities and important events in my life because I like sharing them with my friends."のようにすると良いです。

예시: I usually talk about my daily activities and important events in my life because I like sharing them with my friends.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で明確な表現を心がけ、理由を具体的に述べましょう。例えば、"I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable discussing personal matters privately."のようにすると良いです。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable discussing personal matters privately.

제안: 回答は少し冗長で文法的な誤りがあります。より自然で効果的に理由を述べるために、簡潔にし、接続詞を使いましょう。例えば、"I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see expressions and body language, which helps me understand better."のようにすると良いです。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see expressions and body language, which helps me understand better.

제안: 意味が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different backgrounds, but we respect each other's opinions."のようにすると良いです。

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different backgrounds, but we respect each other's opinions.

× Yes of course I do like chatting with my friends every day physically and or social media.

✓ Yes, of course I do like chatting with my friends every day, physically or on social media.

The phrase 'physically and or social media' is incorrect. It should be 'physically or on social media' to correctly express the options. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for clarity.

× Yes of course I do like chatting with my friends every day physically and or social media.

✓ Yes, of course I do like chatting with my friends every day, physically or on social media.

The preposition 'on' is required before 'social media' to indicate the platform used for chatting.

× I just love to chat with them talking about for the whole day and their personal life.

✓ I just love to chat with them, talking about things for the whole day and their personal lives.

The sentence is awkward and incomplete. Adding 'things' after 'talking about' and changing 'life' to 'lives' to match plural 'them' improves clarity and grammar.

× I usually chat with my friends about everyday activities, my life, personal activities, what's going on in my life, everything.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about everyday activities, my life, personal activities, what's going on in my life—everything.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding a dash before 'everything' improves readability. No plural issue here, but punctuation helps.

× The activities active accord in my life I would like to share with my friends.

✓ I would like to share the activities happening in my life with my friends.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Reordering and choosing correct words clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to chat with a single friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with a single friend.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× When this came in personal matter, I would like to take some my personal things my major in the private.

✓ When it comes to personal matters, I prefer to keep some of my personal things private.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting verb form and sentence structure clarifies the meaning.

× So I would like to chat with only one friend whether then group.

✓ So I would like to chat with only one friend rather than a group.

The phrase 'whether then group' is incorrect. It should be 'rather than a group' to express preference.

× Well, I would like to chat and communicate person face to face on social media too.

✓ Well, I would like to chat and communicate in person face to face or on social media too.

The phrase 'communicate person face to face on social media' is incorrect. 'In person face to face' and 'on social media' are two separate modes and need proper prepositions.

× But in case of face to face communication I love the most when we talk to face to face we can see their expressions, their movements and the main thing the way they speaking.

✓ But in the case of face-to-face communication, I love it the most because when we talk face to face, we can see their expressions, their movements, and most importantly, the way they speak.

The original sentence is run-on and ungrammatical. Adding commas, correcting verb forms, and restructuring improves clarity and grammar.

× Yeah, I do agree with my friends on a certain topic because we are grown up from the different parents, different society and different culture.

✓ Yeah, I do agree with my friends on certain topics because we have grown up with different parents, different societies, and different cultures.

'Grown up from' is incorrect; 'have grown up with' is correct. Also, plural forms 'societies' and 'cultures' are needed to match 'different'.

× So I do respect their. Open and I hope they respect mine too.

✓ So I do respect their openness, and I hope they respect mine too.

'Their. Open' is incorrect. It should be 'their openness' to use the noun form. Also, a comma is needed before 'and'.