Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句型，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me relax and lifts my spirits. Whenever I feel bored or a little down, I share my feelings with them, and they usually cheer me up or offer encouragement.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致和时态使用，句子结构应更完整，内容更具体。

예시: I usually chat about different topics depending on the friend. For example, with my close friends, we talk about daily life, while with friends who share my hobbies, we discuss K-pop.

제안: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子结构不够清晰。建议改进冠词使用和句子连贯性，表达更准确。

예시: Although I have many friends, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am an introverted person. Also, some topics might not be suitable to discuss in a group.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议简化句子，注意时态和介词的正确使用，使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's hard to read the other person's expressions on social media. Also, I think social media can be unsafe.

제안: 表达较为简单，句子重复使用“usually”，且“make up together as before”表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but we always reconcile and return to how things were before.

× Different friend will has some different topics.

✓ Different friends will have some different topics.

这里的主语是复数形式的friends，所以谓语动词也应该用复数形式have，而不是单数形式has。

× For example with my close friends we will talking about some daily lives,

✓ For example, with my close friends we will talk about some daily lives,

在情态动词will后面应该接动词原形talk，而不是动名词talking。

× With my hobbies friends we will talk about some K pop.

✓ With my hobby friends we will talk about some K pop.

这里的friends前面的形容词hobbies应改为单数形式hobby，因为hobby是用来修饰friends的单一属性。

× I am a introverted person and sometimes there are some unsuitable things to talk about some friends.

✓ I am an introverted person and sometimes there are some unsuitable things to talk about some friends.

在以元音音素开头的单词introverted前，冠词a应改为an。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I don't know the expression about the other side when I was in via social media and I think the via social media is unsafe.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I don't know the expression of the other side when I am on social media and I think social media is unsafe.

短语中应使用介词of来表示“对方的表情”，而不是about；“在社交媒体上”应使用介词on而不是in；此外，时态应与现在时态保持一致，was应改为am；去掉多余的the。

× Yes, I usually argue with my friend, but we usually make up together as before.

✓ Yes, I usually argue with my friends, but we usually make up together as before.

这里指的是通常和多个朋友争吵，所以friend应改为复数形式friends。