Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'I like to do chatting', say 'I enjoy chatting with my friends'. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated and it's a great way to relax during my free time.

제안: Focus on using correct tense and clearer sentence structure. Avoid filler words and be more specific about the topics. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually chat about important updates related to our subjects and share study materials. Sometimes, we also have casual conversations just to relax and enjoy our leisure time.

제안: Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, such as 'I prefer chatting with groups because I can learn more from different perspectives.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer chatting with groups because it allows me to gain knowledge from various people and learn about different ideas and current issues, as everyone has expertise in their own area.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'queues day of satisfaction'. Use simple, clear sentences to express your preference and reasons.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and satisfying. I can also see the other person's expressions, which helps me understand better.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly. For example, say 'I usually avoid arguments, but I will discuss issues if I believe something is wrong, supporting my points with facts.'

예시: I usually avoid arguing with friends, but if I notice something is wrong, I discuss it with them using facts and examples to support my opinion.

× I like to do chatting with my friends.

✓ I like chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'do chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a gerund and does not require the auxiliary verb 'do'. The correct form is 'I like chatting with my friends.'

× I do chatting to share important updates and, uh, to spend some of my leisure time.

✓ I chat to share important updates and, uh, to spend some of my leisure time.

Using 'do chatting' is incorrect; the verb 'chat' should be used directly in the present simple tense to express habitual actions. Alternatively, 'chatting' can be used without 'do'.

× Most of the time I said important updates about our subject as uh, well as uh, sharing the study material.

✓ Most of the time I say important updates about our subject as well as share the study material.

The verb 'said' is past tense, but the sentence refers to habitual actions, so the present tense 'say' is appropriate. Also, parallel structure requires 'share' instead of 'sharing' here.

× Also at times when I used to chat, uh, in a simple way just to spend my leisure time.

✓ Also, at times I chat in a simple way just to spend my leisure time.

The phrase 'used to chat' implies past habitual action, but the context suggests present habitual action, so 'I chat' is correct. The phrase 'in a simple way' is fine.

× With that I can get a more amount of knowledge from them and also get to know about different ideas and the ongoing issues from different people as everyone are expert in their own area.

✓ With that I can get more knowledge from them and also get to know about different ideas and ongoing issues from different people as everyone is an expert in their own area.

'Amount of knowledge' is uncountable, so 'more knowledge' is better. 'Everyone are' is incorrect; 'everyone' is singular and requires 'is'. Also, 'an expert' is needed before 'in their own area'.

× I prefer to communicate and convey my message face to face rather than social media as I am a old school person and uh conveying message face to face queues day of satisfaction as I can also see.

✓ I prefer to communicate and convey my message face to face rather than via social media as I am an old school person and conveying messages face to face gives a sense of satisfaction as I can also see.

'A old school' should be 'an old school' because 'old' starts with a vowel sound. 'Rather than social media' should be 'rather than via social media' for clarity. 'Queues day of satisfaction' is incorrect; it should be 'gives a sense of satisfaction'. Also, 'message' should be plural 'messages' to match the context.

× Usually I'm not a arguing person, but if I notice some of the things happening not in a right way, I argue with my friends related to those things and with certain facts and example I believe.

✓ Usually I'm not an arguing person, but if I notice some things happening not in the right way, I argue with my friends about those things and with certain facts and examples I believe.

'A arguing' should be 'an arguing' because 'arguing' starts with a vowel sound. 'Some of the things' can be simplified to 'some things'. 'Not in a right way' should be 'not in the right way'. 'Argue with my friends related to those things' should be 'argue with my friends about those things'. 'Example' should be plural 'examples' to match 'facts'.