Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding unclear phrases like 'on off chatting' and 'feel accurate in conversations'. Also, keep your sentences concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't really enjoy chatting casually with friends because it can be exhausting. Instead, I prefer texting or messaging as it's less tiring. I also like doing structured activities with friends, such as playing sports or watching movies, which I find more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by adding a linking phrase to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to include a specific example to make your answer more vivid and engaging.

예시: Usually, my friends and I chat about current events and news. For example, last week we discussed the recent climate change summit and shared our opinions on environmental policies. I find it fascinating to hear different perspectives and have meaningful conversations.

제안: Avoid asking questions back to the examiner and focus on giving a clear, direct answer. Also, correct small errors like 'social cycle' which should be 'social circle'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy the energy and diverse perspectives that come with group conversations. Moreover, it's a great way to meet new people and expand my social circle. I also love the variety of topics that come up in group discussions.

제안: Try to organise your answer more clearly and avoid unclear phrases like 'or associates or when I'm busy'. Use linking words to clarify your points and correct grammar mistakes for better clarity.

예시: My preference depends on the situation and how important or emotional the conversation is. For important talks, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, when I'm busy or chatting with distant friends, social media is more convenient. For local friends, I usually prefer meeting in person.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors and confusing phrases like 'avoid a few minutes' and 'threatened ages'. Try to give a clear, direct answer with simple, correct sentences. Use linking words to explain your reasons.

예시: No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I try to keep our relationships peaceful. Instead, I prefer to discuss things calmly and listen carefully to understand their point of view. Since we usually agree on most things, there is rarely a need to argue.

× No, and particularly on off chatting.

✓ No, and particularly offline chatting.

The phrase 'on off chatting' is incorrect. The correct preposition to describe chatting not online is 'offline'. So, 'offline chatting' is the proper expression.

× I enjoy more structured activities with friends like playing sports or watching movie and I sometimes feel accurate in conversations and prefer listening.

✓ I enjoy more structured activities with friends like playing sports or watching movies and I sometimes feel awkward in conversations and prefer listening.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the plural form of 'sports'. Also, 'feel accurate' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'awkward' or similar to express discomfort in conversations.

× I enjoy more structured activities with friends like playing sports or watching movie and I sometimes feel accurate in conversations and prefer listening.

✓ I enjoy more structured activities with friends like playing sports or watching movies and I sometimes feel awkward in conversations and prefer listening.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'movies' if singular, but since plural is used, no article is needed. The sentence also had 'feel accurate' which is incorrect; 'feel awkward' fits better.

× We talk about recent news stories or events happening around the world and share our opinions on political and social issues.

✓ We talk about recent news stories or events happening around the world and share our opinions on political and social issues.

This sentence is correct; no article errors detected here.

× Is this a great way to meet new people and expand my social cycle?

✓ It is a great way to meet new people and expand my social circle.

The sentence is incorrectly structured as a question when it should be a statement. Also, 'social cycle' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'social circle'.

× And I love the variety of topics that come up in Group discussions.

✓ And I love the variety of topics that come up in group discussions.

The word 'Group' should not be capitalised unless it is a proper noun. Also, no article is needed before 'group discussions'.

× My preference depends on the situation, how important or emotional conversations I feel.

✓ My preference depends on the situation and how important or emotional the conversations are, I feel.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and verb agreement. Adding 'and' and reordering improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Face to face communication however or associates or when I'm busy, social media is more convenient.

✓ Face-to-face communication, however, is preferred for close associates, but when I'm busy, social media is more convenient.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding commas and conjunctions clarifies the meaning.

× I use social media to stay in touch with distant friends, but I prefer face to face interactions for the local friends.

✓ I use social media to stay in touch with distant friends, but I prefer face-to-face interactions with local friends.

The phrase 'for the local friends' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' and 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'.

× No, I try to avoid a few minutes with my friends to maintain harmony in our relationships.

✓ No, I try to avoid arguments with my friends to maintain harmony in our relationships.

The phrase 'avoid a few minutes' is incorrect and does not make sense in context. Likely, the intended meaning is to avoid arguments or conflicts.

× We UU usually be on most things so that is barely a need to agree.

✓ We usually agree on most things so there is barely a need to argue.

The phrase 'We UU usually be' is incorrect and likely a typo. Also, 'barely a need to agree' is illogical; it should be 'barely a need to argue' or 'disagree'.

× I prefer to listen and understand threatened ages in conflicts.

✓ I prefer to listen and understand different perspectives in conflicts.

The phrase 'threatened ages' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is probably 'different perspectives' or 'points of view'.