Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and natural, but you could make it more effective by adding a reason or example to support your statement. This will enrich your response and make it more engaging.

예시: Yes, definitely. I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected with them.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use the correct tense consistently. Also, organize your answer with linking words to make it clearer and more coherent. For example, start with a topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words.

예시: Mostly, we chat about our studies and work. For instance, we discuss current projects and plan what tasks we need to do next.

제안: Avoid filler words and grammatical errors such as 'one people' which should be 'one person'. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide reasons.

예시: I mostly prefer to chat with one person rather than a group because I feel more comfortable and can have a deeper conversation.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Clarify your preference clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid mixing terms like 'face to face via social media' which is contradictory.

예시: I prefer to communicate over the phone rather than face-to-face because it offers more privacy and convenience.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain the conditions under which you argue and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I argue with my friends sometimes, especially when there is a serious problem and I feel that no one is listening to me.

× Uh, mostly we chatted together regarding our studies and also, uh, about the work, what is happening in the work and what will be the next for the work and the studies.

✓ Uh, mostly we chat together regarding our studies and also, uh, about the work, what is happening in the work and what will be next for the work and the studies.

The sentence uses 'chatted' which is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'chat' is appropriate.

× I mostly prefer to chat with one people instead of chatting, uh, chat with the group people because I feel like comfortable, uh uh, to chat with the one people.

✓ I mostly prefer to chat with one person instead of chatting, uh, chatting with a group of people because I feel comfortable, uh uh, chatting with one person.

'People' is plural and cannot be used with 'one'. The correct singular form is 'person'. Also, 'group people' is incorrect; 'a group of people' is the proper phrase. Additionally, 'feel like comfortable' should be 'feel comfortable'.

× No I do not prefer to communicate with face to face via social media because I found that when we do a face to face then there is no privacy so that's why I prefer to talk over the phone instead of using a FaceTime.

✓ No, I do not prefer to communicate face-to-face via social media because I find that when we do face-to-face communication, there is no privacy, so that's why I prefer to talk over the phone instead of using FaceTime.

The phrase 'communicate with face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate face-to-face'. Also, 'found' should be 'find' to match present tense. 'Using a FaceTime' is incorrect; 'using FaceTime' is correct as FaceTime is a proper noun.

× Yes, it depends on the situation. When there is a like a having a too much trouble and a no one listen to me that that time I argue with my friends uh.

✓ Yes, it depends on the situation. When there is too much trouble and no one listens to me, that is when I argue with my friends.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect phrases like 'a like a having a' and 'a no one listen'. These have been corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'No one' is singular and requires 'listens'. The sentence structure is improved for better understanding.