Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點重複，且語法不太自然。建議你用更簡潔且流暢的句子來表達你的想法，避免重複使用相同的詞彙，並注意語法結構。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they are kind and funny. They listen to my thoughts and give me good advice, so we always have a lot of fun together.

제안: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且內容不夠具體。建議你使用正確的時態和連接詞，並提供更具體的細節來豐富回答。

예시: Since I am working now, I usually talk about my job with my friends. We often share our daily work experiences and discuss challenges we face at work.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複用詞，且表達不夠清晰。建議你簡化句子結構，避免重複，並用連接詞使語句更流暢。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one person because I am a focused person. This way, we can concentrate on one topic and have a deeper conversation.

제안: 回答中有多處語法錯誤和重複，且表達不夠流暢。建議你練習使用簡潔且正確的句子，並用連接詞連接原因和結果。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more comfortable. I often feel awkward using video chat since I am not familiar with that tool.

제안: 回答語法錯誤多且表達不清楚。建議你用簡單明確的句子來說明你的觀點，並避免使用不正確的詞彙。

예시: Sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. However, I see it as a healthy exchange of ideas rather than a real argument.

× I love chatting with my friends because they are kind, funny and listen to me what I'm I thought and tell me some advice.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because they are kind, funny, listen to me when I talk, and give me some advice.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'listen to me what I'm I thought' which is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'listen to me when I talk' or 'listen to what I say'. Also, 'tell me some advice' should be 'give me some advice' because 'advice' is uncountable and we 'give' advice, not 'tell' advice.

× I think and we are just had a lot of fun.

✓ I think we just had a lot of fun.

The phrase 'are just had' is incorrect because 'had' is past tense and 'are' is present tense. The correct past tense form is 'we just had a lot of fun' without 'are'.

× As I am working now, so I usually talk about my work every time.

✓ As I am working now, I usually talk about my work all the time.

Using both 'As' and 'so' together is redundant. 'As' already indicates reason, so 'so' should be omitted. Also, 'every time' is better expressed as 'all the time' in this context.

× I talked with my friends and they also shared about their working experiences in their days in their daily life.

✓ I talk with my friends and they also share their working experiences from their daily lives.

The question is about usual habits, so present tense should be used instead of past tense. Also, 'shared about' is incorrect; 'share' is used without 'about'. 'In their days in their daily life' is awkward; 'from their daily lives' is better.

× I prefer to chat with just one people because I, I am a pretty concentrated person.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one person because I am a pretty focused person.

'One people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural. The singular form is 'person'. Also, 'concentrated' is not the correct adjective here; 'focused' is more appropriate.

× I love to try to just focus on one topic and just one person and we can just chat a lot and just focus, you know?

✓ I like to focus on one topic and one person so we can chat a lot and concentrate, you know?

The original sentence has repetitive 'just' and 'and' which makes it awkward. Using 'so' instead of 'and' improves sentence flow. Also, 'love to try to just focus' is wordy; 'like to focus' is clearer.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think in that way it's more comfortable for me because if I I use the the video chat I will feel some awkward from it because I just not from I just not familiar with that tool.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's more comfortable for me. If I use video chat, I feel awkward because I am not familiar with that tool.

The original sentence is long and confusing with repeated words and incorrect prepositions like 'feel some awkward from it'. The correct expression is 'feel awkward'. Also, 'I just not from I just not familiar' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I am not familiar'.

× Sometimes because we all have different opinions on different things and I think it's just a exchange.

✓ Sometimes, because we all have different opinions on different things, and I think it's just an exchange.

The article before 'exchange' should be 'an' not 'a' because 'exchange' starts with a vowel sound. Also, the sentence needs commas to separate clauses properly.

× It's not a argument.

✓ It's not an argument.

The article before 'argument' should be 'an' because 'argument' starts with a vowel sound.

× I think because we just talk about things unfairly and objective and just in a past.

✓ I think because we just talk about things fairly and objectively and only in the past.

The original sentence uses 'unfairly' and 'objective' incorrectly. The intended meaning is likely 'fairly' and 'objectively'. Also, 'just in a past' is incorrect; it should be 'only in the past'.