Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ немного длинный и содержит повторения, например, "I do it a lot because I don't have any other possibility to do it". Постарайтесь сделать ответ более естественным и лаконичным, избегая излишних повторов. Также можно добавить более конкретные детали, чтобы ответ был более содержательным.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially since most of them live far away. We usually talk every day to keep in touch and share our daily experiences.

제안: Ответ содержит интересные детали, но структура немного запутана, и есть грамматические ошибки. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и старайтесь формулировать предложения более естественно. Также избегайте повторов, например, "discuss our boyfriends" и "give verbal advice" можно объединить.

예시: We usually talk about current news and personal matters. For example, my friend Paulina, who recently got married, and I often discuss relationship issues and support each other with advice.

제안: В ответе есть повторения и нечеткие формулировки, например, "my only with one friend" и "only one one person". Постарайтесь избегать таких ошибок и использовать связующие слова для плавности. Также можно добавить более конкретные причины вашего предпочтения.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I'm not very sociable. It feels more comfortable and less tiring for me than talking in a group.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясные выражения, например, "use waste chance". Постарайтесь использовать более точные и естественные выражения, а также связывать предложения логично. Например, объясните, почему предпочитаете личное общение и когда используете социальные сети.

예시: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it's more personal. However, when that's not possible, I use social media to stay connected with my friends.

제안: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и повторения, например, "it it". Фраза "different grades" неясна в данном контексте. Постарайтесь использовать более точные слова и структурировать ответ логично, объясняя причины и последствия споров.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially my boyfriend, because we have different opinions. Although it can be challenging, I believe these arguments don't harm our relationship and are a normal part of life.

× I don't have any other possibility to do it.

✓ I don't have any other way to do it.

The word 'possibility' is not commonly used in this context. 'Way' is a more appropriate quantifier to express a method or means of doing something.

× Most of my friends are far from my house where I live right now so I need to do it every single day.

✓ Most of my friends live far from my house where I live right now, so I need to do it every single day.

The phrase 'are far from my house' is grammatically correct but sounds awkward. Using 'live far from my house' is more natural when referring to where people reside.

× Mostly we discuss our radio news and with my friend Paulina, we discuss our boyfriends, try to give verbal advice for each other because we need it.

✓ Mostly we discuss our radio news, and with my friend Paulina, we discuss our boyfriends and try to give verbal advice to each other because we need it.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'to' when giving advice to someone.

× Paulina has recently married and she currently is trying to overcome some problems, that's why.

✓ Paulina has recently married and she is currently trying to overcome some problems; that's why.

The phrase 'she currently is trying' is awkward; 'she is currently trying' is the correct word order. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma before 'that's why' to separate the clauses properly.

× Since I'm not a very sociable person, it is easier for me to chat only with my only with one friend.

✓ Since I'm not a very sociable person, it is easier for me to chat only with one friend.

The phrase 'my only with one friend' is redundant and incorrect. 'Only with one friend' is sufficient.

× so it is much more comfortable for me to keep chatting with only one one person and not to.

✓ so it is much more comfortable for me to keep chatting with only one person and not more.

The repetition 'one one' is a typo. Also, 'and not to' is incomplete; 'and not more' clarifies the meaning.

× Usually I try to communicate face to face but it can be challenging sometimes or I don't have any chance to do it.

✓ Usually I try to communicate face to face, but it can be challenging sometimes, or I don't have any chance to do it.

A comma is needed before 'but' to separate independent clauses. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× So in this case I need to communicate via social media and that's why I usually try to use waste chance.

✓ So in this case I need to communicate via social media, and that's why I usually try to use every chance.

The phrase 'use waste chance' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'use every chance' meaning to take advantage of all opportunities.

× Yes, I tried to argue with my friends a lot, especially with my boyfriend.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends a lot, especially with my boyfriend.

The question is about habitual behavior, so present tense 'argue' is appropriate rather than past tense 'tried to argue' which implies a one-time or past action.

× We have absolutely different grades and sometimes it it seems to me that it can ruin our relationships, but I believe that it will not.

✓ We have absolutely different opinions, and sometimes it seems to me that it can ruin our relationship, but I believe that it will not.

'Grades' is incorrect in this context; 'opinions' fits better. Also, 'relationships' should be singular 'relationship' when referring to the relationship between two people. The repeated 'it it' is a typo.