Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Попробуйте использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, чтобы выразить свои мысли ясно и естественно. Например, избегайте фраз типа "I haven't any time to sit in surfing in the Internet" и используйте более подходящие выражения.

예시: Actually, I don't like chatting with my friends very much because I don't have enough time to surf the Internet.

제안: В вашем ответе есть ошибки в грамматике и согласовании времен. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Попробуйте строить предложения с правильным использованием времен и добавлять детали.

예시: Usually, when I chat with my friends, we talk about our plans for the coming days and I ask how their day was.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит незавершённые мысли. Рекомендуется строить полные предложения и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также избегайте пауз и слов-паразитов.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it is more fun and I can talk to many people at once.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Используйте правильные сравнения и более точные формулировки, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и понятным.

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because it is easier than meeting face-to-face when I don't have time, and it's easy to understand each other while chatting.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Постарайтесь использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более связным и понятным.

예시: Actually, I don't argue with my friends often, but sometimes we have small disagreements. However, we always make up quickly after an argument.

× Actually, I don't like chatting with my friends. I think it's because of I haven't any time to sit in surfing in the Internet and.

✓ Actually, I don't like chatting with my friends. I think it's because I don't have any time to sit and surf the Internet.

The phrase 'I haven't any time' is incorrect in modern English; the correct form is 'I don't have any time'. Also, 'to sit in surfing in the Internet' is ungrammatical; it should be 'to sit and surf the Internet'. Modal verb usage here relates to the incorrect use of 'haven't' instead of 'don't have'.

× Usually when I chat with my friends, I chatting about our arrangements for recent days and to ask how her day was.

✓ Usually when I chat with my friends, I chat about our arrangements for recent days and ask how her day was.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'I'; the correct form is the base verb 'chat' to match the present tense. Also, 'to ask' should be 'ask' to maintain parallel structure. The error is related to incorrect use of verb + -ing form.

× I prefer, uh, chatting with group. It's good when you have a lot of friends and you don't need. When you have a group, you don't need to chat with others, uh.

✓ I prefer, uh, chatting with a group. It's good when you have a lot of friends and you don't need to chat with others. When you have a group, you don't need to chat with others, uh.

The phrase 'chatting with group' is missing the article 'a' before 'group', which is singular. Also, the sentence 'you don't need' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'you don't need to chat with others'. The error involves singular/plural and article usage.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because it's easy than face to face when you haven't any time to meet with your friends and it's understandable when you chatting.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it's easier than face to face when you don't have any time to meet your friends and it's understandable when you are chatting.

The phrase 'it's easy than' should be 'it's easier than' to correctly compare. 'Haven't any time' is incorrect; 'don't have any time' is correct. 'Meet with your friends' is better as 'meet your friends'. 'When you chatting' should be 'when you are chatting'. The errors involve preposition use and verb forms.

× Actually no, but sometimes yes. I agree with my friends a little, but it's not serious. We always make up it already when we argue.

✓ Actually no, but sometimes yes. I disagree with my friends a little, but it's not serious. We always make up already when we argue.

The phrase 'I agree with my friends a little' contradicts the context of arguing; 'disagree' is appropriate. 'Make up it already' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make up already'. The error relates to modal verb usage and sentence structure.