Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“feel bombed out”应为“feel burned out”，“I complete with them”表达不清晰。建议加强语法准确性和用词的自然性，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel burned out. Talking with them helps me relax and feel comfortable. It really works like a therapy for me.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达略显重复且部分词汇搭配不当，如“my hobbies like the museum”应为“my hobbies such as visiting museums”。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually chat about a variety of topics, such as my favorite cartoons, hobbies like visiting museums, sports, and movies. I also share personal feelings and secrets because it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“one friends”应为“one friend”，“one people's”应为“one person”。建议注意单复数和冠词的正确使用，同时简化表达。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because sometimes when I feel stressed or tired, talking to my best friend who says kind things really helps me relax and feel better.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“warmed out”应为“worn out”，“I calling her like a voice call”表达不清晰。建议加强语法练习，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I prefer communicating online through social media. When I feel worn out, I like to voice call my friend, and she always says nice things that make me feel better.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“she want to go here”应为“she wants to go there”，“So definitely we do. Agreed.”表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致和句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. For example, when we plan to travel, I want to go to one place, but she wants to go somewhere else. However, we usually resolve our disagreements quickly and become closer.

× I just like how it felt to chat with my friend, especially when I feel bombed out.

✓ I just like how it feels to chat with my friends, especially when I feel bombed out.

这里主语是复数friends，动词feel应与主语一致用第三人称单数形式feels。

× I talk with my friend and I complete with them and then I just feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I talk with my friends and I compete with them and then I just feel relaxed and comfortable.

friend应为复数friends，complete应为正确单词compete。

× Actually, with a friend I discuss a wide range of topics like my favorite cartoons, my hobbies like the museum, sports and the movies, and also sharing some personal feelings and secrets.

✓ Actually, with friends I discuss a wide range of topics like my favorite cartoons, my hobbies like museums, sports and movies, and also share some personal feelings and secrets.

friend应为复数friends，museum应为复数museums，movies前不需要冠词the，sharing应改为share以保持句子结构一致。

× One friends or a group of people.

✓ One friend or a group of people.

one后面应接单数friend，而非复数friends。

× For me, that's definitely one people's 'cause you know, sometimes I feel stressed or tired.

✓ For me, that's definitely one person's 'cause you know, sometimes I feel stressed or tired.

people是复数，one后应接单数所有格person's。

× I just want to talk with my friend, my best friend, and she said a lot of nice things to me, which is very therapeutic for me.

✓ I just want to talk with my friend, my best friend, and she says a lot of nice things to me, which is very therapeutic for me.

动词时态应与上下文一致，she said改为she says。

× It's make me feel relaxed and much better.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and much better.

主语it为第三人称单数，谓语动词make应加-s变为makes。

× Face to face or via social media That's definitely talking online.

✓ Face to face or via social media, that's definitely talking online.

句子缺少逗号，且前半句应为Face-to-face。

× I just like how it felt to chat with my friend on social media.

✓ I just like how it feels to chat with my friends on social media.

主语friends应为复数，动词felt改为现在时feels。

× So like sometimes I feel warmed out.

✓ So like sometimes I feel worn out.

短语应为worn out，表示疲惫。

× I chat with my friend. I calling her like a voice call and she said also nice things to me.

✓ I chat with my friend. I call her, like a voice call, and she also says nice things to me.

calling应为call，she said应为she says，保持时态一致。

× Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× For example, when we decided to travel, I want to go there, but she want to go here.

✓ For example, when we decided to travel, I wanted to go there, but she wanted to go here.

动词时态应为过去式，want改为wanted。

× So definitely we do. Agreed.

✓ So definitely we do agree.

句子结构错误，do后应接动词原形agree。

× But sometimes 20 minutes later we resolved them quickly.

✓ But sometimes, 20 minutes later, we resolve them quickly.

时态应为现在时resolve以符合上下文。

× Yeah, and we become so close again.

✓ Yeah, and we become so close again.

此句无错误，保持原句。