Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为冗长且有重复表达，如“support with each other”和“encourage with each other”意思相近，建议简化语言，避免重复，同时注意语法，如“bond our relationships”应为“strengthen our relationships”。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows us to share interesting and happy moments, support each other, and strengthen our relationships.

제안: 回答内容较好，但部分表达不够自然，如“Most of them are the normal things”建议改为“Mostly, I talk about everyday things”。另外，最后一句“share the happiness”表达不够准确，建议改为“share our feelings”或“feel better”。

예시: Mostly, I talk about everyday things like interesting movies I've watched recently and books I've enjoyed. Also, when I feel stressed, chatting with friends helps me feel better by sharing our feelings.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且重复使用“share”，建议使用连接词简化句子结构，避免重复。比如“share the recent interesting things and stressful things”可以合并表达。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because it covers a wider range of topics. We can share recent experiences, both good and stressful, which can be helpful and meaningful to everyone.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误，如“facial express expressions”和“body languages”应为“facial expressions”和“body language”。建议简化句子，避免重复。

예시: I prefer face-to-face conversations because we can read facial expressions and body language, which makes the interaction more lively.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“arguing can't just address any issues”应为“arguing doesn't solve problems”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意时态一致。

예시: I usually don't argue with my friends. When conflicts arise, we prefer to stay calm and discuss our opinions peacefully because arguing doesn't solve problems. Peaceful conversations help us improve our relationships.

× Yes, I think chatting with friends is a very warm hearted process because you can share the interesting things and the happy things with your friends and we can support with each other and encourage with each other and also bond our relationships.

✓ Yes, I think chatting with friends is a very warm-hearted process because you can share interesting things and happy things with your friends, and we can support each other, encourage each other, and also bond our relationships.

“support with each other”和“encourage with each other”中的“with”是不必要的，正确用法是“support each other”和“encourage each other”。此外，“warm hearted”应连写为“warm-hearted”，形容词复合词需要连字符。

× Most of them are the normal things in my daily life, such as the interesting movie I watched recently and the books that I read and loved.

✓ Most of them are normal things in my daily life, such as the interesting movies I watched recently and the books that I have read and loved.

“the normal things”中“the”不必要，应去掉；“movie”应为复数“movies”，因为“most of them”指多个事物；“that I read and loved”时态应与上下文保持一致，使用现在完成时“have read and loved”更合适。

× I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to have a chat with wider topics and we can share the recent interesting things and stressful things with each other and share the experiences that will be useful to others.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to have chats on wider topics, and we can share recent interesting things and stressful things with each other and share experiences that will be useful to others.

“have a chat with wider topics”中“with”应改为“on”，表示“关于更广泛的话题”；“the recent interesting things”中“the”不必要，应去掉；“share the experiences”中“the”也不必要。

× I prefer having a conversation face to face because I think through such kind of conversations we can read the facial express expressions and the body languages from others also that will make the conversation more lively.

✓ I prefer having a conversation face to face because I think through this kind of conversation we can read facial expressions and body language from others, which also makes the conversation more lively.

“such kind of conversations”应改为“this kind of conversation”，表达更准确；“facial express expressions”重复，应为“facial expressions”；“body languages”应为不可数名词“body language”；“which also makes the conversation more lively”更符合英语表达习惯。

× I still don't argue with my friends. Actually, when we had the conflicts, we prefer staying calm and exchanging our opinions peacefully because arguing can't just address any issues.

✓ I still don't argue with my friends. Actually, when we have conflicts, we prefer staying calm and exchanging our opinions peacefully because arguing can't really address any issues.

“when we had the conflicts”时态不对，应为一般现在时“when we have conflicts”，因为这是习惯性动作；“can't just address any issues”表达不准确，应为“can't really address any issues”。

× Only a peaceful conversation can help us become better.

✓ Only a peaceful conversation can help us become better people.

句子缺少宾语，补充“people”使句子完整，表达更清晰。