Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Améliorez la fluidité en évitant les hésitations et les répétitions inutiles. Utilisez des phrases complètes et claires pour exprimer votre idée principale, puis ajoutez un détail spécifique pour enrichir la réponse.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, we often share our experiences and support each other, which strengthens our relationships.

제안: Évitez les répétitions et améliorez la clarté en structurant votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie de détails spécifiques. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente.

예시: I usually talk about my daily routine and future plans. Additionally, I ask for their opinions on various topics because I value their experience and advice.

제안: Travaillez sur la clarté et évitez les répétitions. Formulez une réponse directe avec une phrase principale claire, puis expliquez votre préférence avec des raisons précises.

예시: I usually chat daily with my best friend, but I also like talking to other friends occasionally to maintain strong relationships and stay connected.

제안: Réduisez les hésitations et améliorez la fluidité en utilisant des phrases complètes et en expliquant clairement vos préférences avec des raisons spécifiques.

예시: As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media, especially when I'm tired or not feeling well, because it allows me to interact comfortably without face-to-face pressure.

제안: Complétez vos phrases et évitez les hésitations. Donnez une réponse claire avec une explication complète et un exemple si possible.

예시: I usually avoid arguing with friends because I value our relationship. However, if someone hurts me or behaves badly, I try to discuss the issue calmly to resolve it.

× chatting, uh, give us the opportunity to keep talking with friends and family members, even if you don't have enough time to.

✓ chatting, uh, gives us the opportunity to keep talking with friends and family members, even if you don't have enough time to.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'chatting'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving the verb + -ing form acting as a singular noun.

× I usually share with them my daily routine, what my or my news, my future plans.

✓ I usually share with them my daily routine, my news, and my future plans.

The phrase 'what my or my news' is unclear and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'my news' to correctly express the intended meaning. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure.

× So I really, really, really rely on them and on them. Their experience.

✓ So I really, really, really rely on them and their experience.

The repetition 'and on them. Their experience.' is redundant and incorrect. It should be combined into 'and their experience' for clarity and correctness. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure.

× I keep chatting every day with my best friend, but sometimes I prefer to ask and talk with my other friends to keep the relationship strong and to to make to make them always my, to keep them always my my friends and to keep the relationship.

✓ I chat every day with my best friend, but sometimes I prefer to ask and talk with my other friends to keep the relationship strong and to always keep them my friends and maintain the relationship.

The sentence contains repeated words and awkward phrasing such as 'to to make to make them always my, to keep them always my my friends'. These should be corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'keep chatting' is better as 'chat' here. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure.

× Well, I'm an introvert person so I don't prefer to meet every time uh, people and communicate with them, especially when I feel tired or not well enough to talk with people.

✓ Well, I'm an introverted person so I don't prefer to meet people every time and communicate with them, especially when I feel tired or not well enough to talk with people.

The adjective 'introvert' should be 'introverted' to correctly describe the person. Also, 'meet every time uh, people' is awkward; it should be 'meet people every time'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure.