Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa shizen de, kanketsu ni shite kudasai. 'I can share my mind' wa 'I can share my thoughts' ni shita hou ga yoku, 'what are we thinking every day' wa fukuzatsu ni natte iru node, motto kantan ni setsumei shite kudasai.

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and understand theirs. Sometimes, we have different opinions, which makes our conversations interesting.

제안: Kantan de shizen na eigo wo tsukatte, kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wo sakete kudasai. 'We are usually chat about thought' wa 'We usually chat about our thoughts' ni shite, motto shousai wo tsukete kudasai.

예시: We usually chat about our thoughts and feelings because we find it interesting to understand each other's perspectives.

제안: Answer wa motto shizen ni shite, 'so much friends' wa 'many friends' ni shite kudasai. 'I only need 1 friend' wa 'I prefer having only one close friend' to iu hou ga yoku tsutawaru desu.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it hard to trust many people, so having one close friend is enough for me.

제안: Answer no owari ga fukanzen desu. 'so I can be sure about the' no ato ni nanika hitsuyou desu. Mata, 'really girl or really boy' wa 'whether the person is really a girl or a boy' ni shite kudasai.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I cannot fully trust social media. For example, I cannot be sure whether the person is really a girl or a boy, so face-to-face communication feels more reliable.

제안: Answer wa kantan de shizen desu ga, 'I just need to tell my opinion' wa 'I just express my opinion' ni shite, motto rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends because I just express my opinion clearly, and they usually understand what I mean.

× We are usually chat about thought.

✓ We usually chat about thoughts.

The phrase 'are usually chat' is incorrect because 'chat' should be in the base form after 'usually' without 'are'. Also, 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match the context of topics discussed. The correct form is 'We usually chat about thoughts.'

× We are usually chat about thought.

✓ We usually chat about thoughts.

The noun 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts' because it refers to multiple ideas or topics. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about general subjects of conversation.

× Also I like to know what people are thinking so we can share what are we thinking every day and sometimes that way of thinking is not same.

✓ Also, I like to know what people are thinking so we can share what we are thinking every day, and sometimes that way of thinking is not the same.

The phrase 'what are we thinking' is incorrect word order for an indirect question; it should be 'what we are thinking'. Also, 'not same' should be 'not the same' to be grammatically correct.

× Also I like to know what people are thinking so we can share what are we thinking every day and sometimes that way of thinking is not same.

✓ Also, I like to know what people are thinking so we can share what we are thinking every day, and sometimes that way of thinking is not the same.

The phrase 'that way of thinking is not same' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'same'. The correct phrase is 'not the same'.

× It's very interesting topic for us and we like to know what people are thinking.

✓ It's a very interesting topic for us and we like to know what people are thinking.

The phrase 'It's very interesting topic' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very interesting topic' because 'topic' is a singular countable noun.

× It is because I'm not good at having so much friends and for me it is hard to trust people so I only need 1 friend.

✓ It is because I'm not good at having so many friends and for me it is hard to trust people so I only need one friend.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'friends' is a countable noun, so 'many' should be used. Also, the numeral '1' should be written as 'one' in formal writing.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I cannot trust social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I cannot trust social media.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective.

× I cannot know if the person is really girl or really boy, so I prefer to communicate face to face so I can be sure about the.

✓ I cannot know if the person is really a girl or really a boy, so I prefer to communicate face-to-face so I can be sure about them.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'girl' and 'boy'. Also, the pronoun 'the' at the end is incorrect; it should be 'them' to refer to the person.