Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it's only suitable for my good friends”应改为“only with my good friends”，以及“maybe I'm not wish to chat with him”应改为“maybe I don't want to chat with them”。建议注意主谓一致和正确使用动词形式，同时使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends, but only with my good friends. If I don't know someone well, I usually don't want to chat with them.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不准确，如“my motion”应为“my emotions”或“my feelings”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，并通过连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I usually chat about a wide range of topics, such as my daily life, the weather, and my feelings. I like to share my experiences with my friends.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构有些断裂，如“there'll always be. Someone's opinion is different from mine”应合并为一句。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

예시: I prefer to chat with only one friend because in a group, there are often different opinions, and sometimes I prefer to stay quiet.

제안: 回答内容完整，但“more deep”应改为“deeper”，表达更准确。建议注意形容词比较级的正确使用，并可增加具体原因使回答更丰富。

예시: I prefer to communicate face to face because the conversations are deeper and help build closer relationships. However, if we can't meet in person, social media is a good alternative.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“Sometime”应为“Sometimes”，“agree everything he or she said”应为“agree with everything he or she says”。建议注意时态和介词的正确使用，并使表达更自然。

예시: Sometimes I argue with my good friends. If the relationship is not very close, I tend to agree with everything they say. But with good friends, we usually discuss our opinions instead of arguing.

× If there are someone I'm not familiar, maybe I'm not wish to chat with him.

✓ If there is someone I'm not familiar with, maybe I don't wish to chat with him.

这里的主语是单数someone，应该用单数形式的be动词is，而不是are。同时，'not wish'用法不正确，应该用'don't wish'。另外，'familiar'后面需要加介词'with'。

× If there are someone I'm not familiar, maybe I'm not wish to chat with him.

✓ If there is someone I'm not familiar with, maybe I don't wish to chat with him.

'familiar'后面需要加介词'with'，表示对某人不熟悉。

× If there are someone I'm not familiar, maybe I'm not wish to chat with him.

✓ If there is someone I'm not familiar with, maybe I don't wish to chat with him.

'not wish'用法不正确，应该用'don't wish'来表达否定的意愿。

× It's maybe my daily life, today's weather or my motion and so on.

✓ It may be my daily life, today's weather, or my emotions and so on.

'motion'应为复数形式'emotions'，表示情绪。

× It's maybe my daily life, today's weather or my motion and so on.

✓ It may be my daily life, today's weather, or my emotions and so on.

'maybe'用作副词，位置不正确，应该用'may be'表示可能性。

× I think I will share my all daily life, my experience with my friends.

✓ I think I will share all my daily life and my experiences with my friends.

'my all daily life'表达不正确，应该是'all my daily life'。同时，'experience'应为复数形式'experiences'。

× If there are a lot of people, I think there'll always be.

✓ If there are a lot of people, I think there will always be.

缩写形式'there'll'应完整写为'there will'以保持正式和清晰。

× If there are a lot of people, I think there'll always be.

✓ If there are a lot of people, I think there will always be someone whose opinion is different from mine.

原句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构错误。

× Someone's opinion is different from mine, so at that time I would choose to be quiet.

✓ Someone's opinion is different from mine, so at that time I would choose to be quiet.

此句无明显代词错误，保持原句。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because the chat will be more deep and the relationship will be closer.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because the chat will be deeper and the relationship will be closer.

'face to face'应连字符连接为'face-to-face'，'more deep'应改为比较级'deeper'。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because the chat will be more deep and the relationship will be closer.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because the chat will be deeper and the relationship will be closer.

'deep'作为形容词，比较级应为'deeper'，而不是'more deep'。

× But if there are some situations that we can't chat face to face, the social media is a good choice too.

✓ But if there are some situations where we can't chat face-to-face, social media is a good choice too.

'that'改为'where'更合适，'face to face'应为'face-to-face'，'the social media'应去掉定冠词'the'。

× But if there are some situations that we can't chat face to face, the social media is a good choice too.

✓ But if there are some situations where we can't chat face-to-face, social media is a good choice too.

'social media'作为不可数名词，前面不需要定冠词'the'。

× Sometime I will argue with my good friends.

✓ Sometimes I will argue with my good friends.

'Sometime'应为副词复数形式'Sometimes'，表示有时。

× If this one's relationship is not so good with me, I will agree everything he or she said.

✓ If this person's relationship with me is not so good, I will agree with everything he or she says.

'this one's relationship'表达不自然，改为'this person's relationship'。'agree everything'应为'agree with everything'。时态应保持一致，'said'改为'says'。

× But if she or he is my good friend, maybe we will discuss, not argue.

✓ But if he or she is my good friend, maybe we will discuss, not argue.

习惯用法是'he or she'，而不是'she or he'。