Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có nhiều từ ngữ thừa như "umm", "uh" làm giảm sự lưu loát. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại ý giống nhau để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected and share experiences. I usually prefer chatting over calling because it's more convenient.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa như "uh", "umm". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói để làm phong phú nội dung.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about school life, such as our classes, homework, and upcoming exams. Sometimes, we also talk about our hobbies and weekend plans.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ ngữ thừa, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "a group of friend" thành "a group of friends". Hãy trả lời rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, I prefer chatting with a group of friends when planning a trip, but for personal matters, I usually talk to my best friend one-on-one.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ "umm" và "like" quá nhiều để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng để thể hiện ý kiến một cách hiệu quả.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express my emotions clearly and build stronger connections. In contrast, social media sometimes weakens personal relationships.

제안: Bạn đã dùng sai từ "government" thay vì "argument" hoặc "disagreement". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sửa lỗi từ vựng, dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và tránh lặp lại ý.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, I believe that occasional disagreements are normal and help us understand each other better.

× I'm students so I often talk to them on some topic around throughout my, umm, life in schools.

✓ I'm a student so I often talk to them on some topics around throughout my, umm, life in school.

The word 'students' is plural but the subject 'I' is singular, so it should be 'a student'. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'some'. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' to refer to the general concept of school life.

× I prefer to chat with a group of friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to multiple people in a group.

× I just say that with my best friend.

✓ I just say that to my best friend.

The verb 'say' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person spoken to.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because umm, like I can meet my friends directly and I can umm, it helps me express my feelings more, umm, more obviously.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because umm, like I can meet my friends directly and it helps me express my feelings more obviously.

The phrase 'I can umm, it helps me' is incorrect; 'I can' should be removed to avoid redundancy and incorrect sentence structure.

× I just feel like social media can reduce my relationship.

✓ I just feel like social media can reduce my relationships.

The word 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple social connections.

× I often have a government.

✓ I often have an argument.

The word 'government' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'argument' to mean a disagreement.

× I have often have a government with my friends when we have different opinions about something.

✓ I often have an argument with my friends when we have different opinions about something.

The phrase 'have often have' is redundant; it should be 'often have'. Also, 'government' is incorrect and should be 'argument'.

× It just helps me to understand my friend.

✓ It just helps me to understand my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to multiple people.