Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「Especially my best is my best friend」は不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の正確さを向上させましょう。

예시: Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially my best friend. Sometimes, I get new ideas from them that I can use in my daily life.

제안: 内容は理解できますが、文法や語順の誤りが多く、話の流れが不自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: The topics we discuss often change depending on the situation. Usually, we talk about studying or the latest trends, and sometimes we share interesting experiences that happened to us.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。特に「in the globe compared to the modular」は不明瞭です。簡潔で正確な表現を使い、自分の理由を明確に述べましょう。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a bit shy and find it difficult to speak well in a group.

제안: 表現が不自然で、文法の誤りもあります。「be your social media」は意味が不明瞭です。対面コミュニケーションの利点を明確に述べ、文を整理しましょう。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's facial expressions and use body language, which helps me understand their feelings better than social media.

제안: 回答が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な例を整理して、文法的に正しい文章で答える練習が必要です。

예시: I rarely argue with my friends, but sometimes we disagree when I see them doing something wrong. For example, if a friend behaves badly, I might express my opinion and argue with them.

× Especially my best is my best friend and sometimes I can gain a new idea, it's from my friends which can use for my daily lives.

✓ Especially my best friend is my best friend and sometimes I can gain new ideas from my friends which I can use in my daily life.

The sentence has singular and plural inconsistencies. 'my best' should be 'my best friend' to be clear. 'a new idea' should be plural 'new ideas' because ideas are countable and multiple. 'my friends which can use' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends from whom I can use' or simplified as 'from my friends which I can use'. 'daily lives' should be singular 'daily life' because it refers to the general routine of one person.

× Especially my best is my best friend and sometimes I can gain a new idea, it's from my friends which can use for my daily lives.

✓ Especially my best friend is my best friend and sometimes I can gain new ideas from my friends which I can use in my daily life.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to using ideas in daily life.

× Often the topic has changed by the situation, but naturally I speak with my friends about the studying or the latest trends.

✓ Often the topic changes depending on the situation, but naturally I speak with my friends about studying or the latest trends.

The phrase 'changed by the situation' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'changes depending on the situation'. Also, 'the studying' is incorrect; 'studying' without 'the' is appropriate here.

× I prefer chat with only one friends to in their group of people because I'm a little bit shy people so I can't speak well in the globe compared to the modular.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend rather than in a group of people because I'm a little bit shy, so I can't speak well in a group compared to one-on-one.

'one friends' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend' (singular). 'in their group of people' is awkward; 'in a group of people' is better. 'shy people' should be 'shy' describing the speaker. 'in the globe' is incorrect; likely meant 'in a group'. 'compared to the modular' is unclear; corrected to 'compared to one-on-one' for clarity.

× I like their face to face communications and be your social media, uh, because I can feel the opponents feeling by seeing their face and also we can use body languages.

✓ I like face-to-face communication more than social media because I can feel the other person's feelings by seeing their face and also we can use body language.

'their face to face communications' is incorrect; 'face-to-face communication' is the correct phrase. 'be your social media' is incorrect; should be 'more than social media'. 'opponents feeling' is incorrect; 'other person's feelings' is appropriate. 'body languages' should be singular 'body language'.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends about this. Uh, quite rarely. Umm. For example, in the case I uh. Find my friends doing the bad thing I'm or I'm all out. Sometimes I argue with.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends about this, but quite rarely. For example, if I find my friends doing something bad, I get upset. Sometimes I argue with them.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Find' should be 'find' in present tense as a conditional. 'doing the bad thing' should be 'doing something bad'. 'I'm or I'm all out' is unclear; corrected to 'I get upset'. The last fragment 'Sometimes I argue with.' is incomplete; added 'them' to complete the sentence.