Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends through text because I prefer face-to-face conversations or video calls, which feel more personal and engaging.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng (Mozambique không phù hợp). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our studies, such as assignments and projects. We also talk about our favorite K-pop idols and the latest dramas in our lives.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'chat' thay vì 'touch'), và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách logic.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a large group because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me express my thoughts clearly, and I can use body language to avoid misunderstandings.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'after World War I' không phù hợp). Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để ý tưởng được truyền đạt hiệu quả.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but not often because I believe arguments don't solve problems. Usually, I prefer to stay calm or let them have their way to keep the peace.

× Actually I'm not really into chatting with my friends because I would prefer to talk face to face or make a video call rather than that, so I don't love it actually.

✓ Actually, I'm not really into chatting with my friends because I would prefer to talk face to face or make a video call rather than that, so I don't really love it.

The phrase 'I don't love it actually' is awkward and informal. Adding 'really' before 'love' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× Mozambique is about my study, like changing my assignment to do the task and also we also talk about some drama in our life like K pop or idols.

✓ My chats are about my studies, like changing my assignments to do tasks, and we also talk about some drama in our lives, like K-pop or idols.

The original sentence is unclear and has structural issues. 'Mozambique' seems out of context and likely a mispronunciation or error. The correction clarifies the subject and improves sentence flow and agreement.

× I prefer to touch with one friend rather than with a roof of a lot of people.

✓ I prefer to talk with one friend rather than with a group of a lot of people.

The verb 'touch' is incorrect here; it should be 'talk'. Also, 'roof of a lot of people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'group of a lot of people'.

× I think because of my personality is introverts.

✓ I think it's because my personality is introverted.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'because of'. Also, 'introverts' is plural noun, but the adjective 'introverted' is needed to describe personality.

× So that's why I'm really embarrassing to talk and chat with a lot of people and so that I prefer to talk, which is once.

✓ So that's why I'm really embarrassed to talk and chat with a lot of people, so I prefer to talk one-on-one.

'Embarrassing' is an adjective describing something that causes embarrassment; the correct form is 'embarrassed' to describe the speaker's feeling. 'Which is once' is unclear; 'one-on-one' is the correct phrase.

× Absolutely communicate face to face because I'm not really good at spreading my mind and my thinking so that's why everyone would misunderstood what I'm saying.

✓ I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face because I'm not really good at expressing my thoughts, so that's why everyone would misunderstand what I'm saying.

'Spreading my mind and my thinking' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'expressing my thoughts'. Also, 'would misunderstood' should be 'would misunderstand'.

× Sometime, uh not really often because umm, after World War I realized that egg you not bring any benefits.

✓ Sometimes, uh not really often because, umm, after a while I realized that arguing does not bring any benefits.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'After World War' is likely a mishearing; 'after a while' fits better. 'Egg you' is incorrect; the intended word is 'arguing'. Also, 'not bring' should be 'does not bring'.

× So I prefer to come silence or just give them win.

✓ So I prefer to keep silent or just let them win.

'Come silence' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep silent'. 'Give them win' should be 'let them win'.