Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如动词时态和形式错误；同时，回答应更自然流畅，避免口头语“MMM”。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并简洁明了地说明原因。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my feelings and get support from them.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并具体说明聊天内容。

예시: I usually talk with my friends about current news and our shared hobbies, such as reading and sports.

제안: 回答较为自然，但口头语“umm”较多，影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Actually, I am introverted and prefer chatting with one friend because we can have deep conversations and share our opinions.

제안: 回答内容矛盾且表达不清晰。建议明确表达偏好，并用连接词解释原因，避免模糊和矛盾。

예시: I usually prefer face-to-face communication with close friends because I can see their emotions, but I also use social media to stay in touch.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确说明观点，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends during trips because everyone has different opinions, but it does not affect our friendship.

× I always chatting with my friends.

✓ I am always chatting with my friends.

动词进行时态需要使用be动词加动词的-ing形式，原句缺少be动词，正确表达为“I am always chatting”。

× I usually chat a chat with my friend about the current news or the things or hobbies we we all like it.

✓ I usually chat with my friend about the current news or the things or hobbies we all like.

“chat a chat”重复且不正确，应去掉多余的“a chat”；“we we”重复，应去掉一个；句尾“like it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× I usually chat a chat with my friend about the current news or the things or hobbies we we all like it.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about the current news or the things or hobbies we all like.

“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，因为通常和多个朋友聊天。

× Actually I'm introverted and umm do not have so many friends, so I always umm chat with one friend.

✓ Actually I'm introverted and umm do not have so many friends, so I always umm chat with one friend.

此句无明显动词-ing形式错误，保持原句。

× We can talk deeply and share our opinion, connect ourselves.

✓ We can talk deeply and share our opinions, and connect with each other.

“share our opinion”应为复数“opinions”；“connect ourselves”表达不自然，改为“connect with each other”更合适。

× Usually I prefer to communicate face to face with the people who close to me and I can see the emotion expression of the people.

✓ Usually I prefer to communicate face to face with the people who are close to me and I can see the emotional expressions of the people.

“who close to me”缺少be动词，应为“who are close to me”；“emotion expression”应为复数“emotional expressions”。

× And by the way, I prefer social media.

✓ But by the way, I prefer social media.

“And”连接前后句逻辑不顺，改用“but”更合适表示转折。

× Of course, sometimes I argue with friends in the travel.

✓ Of course, sometimes I argue with friends during travel.

“in the travel”表达不正确，应改为“during travel”表示“在旅行期间”。

× Calls different peoples have different opinion is normally, but it will not hurt our connection.

✓ Because different people have different opinions, it is normal, but it will not hurt our connection.

“peoples”应为“people”；“opinion”应为复数“opinions”；句子结构混乱，需调整为完整句子。