Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçimi hataları var. "pratic" yerine "practical" kullanılmalı ve cümleler daha akıcı hale getirilmeli. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı daha kısa ve öz tutmaya çalışın.

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is more practical than phone calls. You can text them anytime without worrying about their availability, which makes it easier to have important conversations.

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları mevcut. "there's so many things happens" yerine "many things happen" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz.

예시: I usually chat about many things that happen in our lives. For example, I share details about my family relationships, academic situations, and friendships because we like to keep each other updated.

제안: Cümle yapılarınızda bazı hatalar var ve ifadeleriniz biraz karışık. "feels like more safe" yerine "feels safer" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha net ve düzenli ifade etmeye çalışın.

예시: I enjoy chatting with my group of friends because it's fun, but I feel safer talking one-on-one since I can share more personal things without feeling nervous.

제안: Cevabınız oldukça iyi ancak bazı tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "true emotions and true feelings" ifadesi yerine sadece "true emotions" yeterli olur. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmaya çalışın.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand people's true emotions and use body language, which helps in better understanding the conversation.

제안: Cümlelerinizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları var, örneğin "not interested with arguing" yerine "not interested in arguing" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla bağlamaya çalışın.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but I don't like it. We have different opinions because our lives are different, so disagreements happen occasionally.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because chatting is more pratic than phone calls because you're not always being available for phone calls.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because chatting is more practical than phone calls since you're not always available for phone calls.

The word 'pratic' is a misspelling of 'practical'. Also, 'being available' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'available' as an adjective. The sentence is improved by replacing 'because' with 'since' to avoid repetition and improve flow.

× So if there's something important and you have to speak in this time, you can just text your friend and you can have a conversation about this topic.

✓ So if there is something important and you have to speak at that time, you can just text your friend and have a conversation about the topic.

The phrase 'in this time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for specific times. Also, 'this topic' should be 'the topic' to refer back to the mentioned subject. 'There's' is acceptable but expanded for clarity.

× Basically everything, there's so many things happens in our life.

✓ Basically everything, there are so many things that happen in our lives.

'There's' is singular and should be 'there are' for plural 'things'. 'Happens' should be 'happen' to agree with plural subject. 'Our life' should be plural 'our lives' to reflect multiple individuals.

× So and we want, we love to sharing these things with each other.

✓ So, we want and love to share these things with each other.

The phrase 'we love to sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'we love to share' because 'to' is followed by the base verb. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and improved by reordering.

× I'm sharing with them with my family relations, my academic situations, my relationships with other persons, everything that we share.

✓ I share with them about my family relationships, my academic situations, my relationships with other people—everything that we share.

'Sharing with them with' is redundant; 'share with them about' is clearer. 'Family relations' is better as 'family relationships'. 'Other persons' is unnatural; 'other people' is preferred.

× I'm not sure about the answer of this question because I love chatting with my friend group but also chatting with only one person feels like more safe.

✓ I'm not sure about the answer to this question because I love chatting with my friend group, but chatting with only one person feels safer.

'Answer of this question' should be 'answer to this question'. 'Feels like more safe' is incorrect; it should be 'feels safer' (comparative adjective). Also, the sentence is improved by adding a comma before 'but'.

× You can talk about everything in your life but a group chat is feels me a bit nervous.

✓ You can talk about everything in your life, but a group chat makes me a bit nervous.

'Is feels me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes me'. Also, a comma is needed before 'but' to separate clauses.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because while you're communicating face to face, you can understand people's true emotions and true feelings about you, and you can use your body while you're talking about something and it's helped to understand the topic.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when you're communicating face to face, you can understand people's true emotions and feelings about you, and you can use your body language while talking, which helps to understand the topic.

'While' is better replaced with 'when' to indicate time. 'Use your body' is vague; 'use your body language' is clearer. 'It's helped' should be 'which helps' for correct tense and clarity.

× Sometimes, unfortunately, I argue with my friend.

✓ Sometimes, unfortunately, I argue with my friends.

'My friend' is singular but context suggests plural 'friends' is more appropriate. No modal verb error here, but plural correction is needed.

× I'm not interested with arguing, especially with my friends.

✓ I'm not interested in arguing, especially with my friends.

The correct preposition after 'interested' is 'in', not 'with'.

× But sometimes we are not having a same idea because we're sharing different lives, so our life expressions are very different.

✓ But sometimes we do not have the same idea because we have different lives, so our life experiences are very different.

'Are not having' is incorrect; simple present 'do not have' is correct. 'A same idea' should be 'the same idea'. 'Life expressions' is unclear; 'life experiences' is more natural.

× We have different opinions about different topics sometimes.

✓ Sometimes, we have different opinions about different topics.

The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed at the beginning for natural flow.