Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多的填充词（如 'umm', 'uh'），这会影响流利度和自然度。建议减少使用填充词，回答时更简洁直接，同时保持内容的丰富性。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about sports, health topics, and relationships.

제안: 回答较长且有些重复，且结尾有语法错误。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about sports, health issues, and relationships. For example, as students, we discuss problems related to our subjects so that we can help each other make progress, which helps us stay connected and support one another.

제안: 回答结构清晰，但有语法错误（如 'in genuine interested in'），建议注意语法准确性，并适当使用连接词提升表达流畅度。

예시: Generally, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I tend to be somewhat reserved in group conversations. Talking one-on-one makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, and it allows me to focus on topics that we are both genuinely interested in.

제안: 回答中存在语法不完整和表达不清晰的问题。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免断句错误，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: From my perspective, I prefer to communicate through social media platforms such as WeChat and TikTok because they are very convenient. For instance, I can easily stay in touch with my friends and family members no matter where they are, which is especially helpful when geographical barriers make face-to-face communication difficult.

제안: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅自然。

예시: I don't really argue with my friends because I consider them very important in my life. Usually, we have friendly discussions about topics that interest both of us, and we respect each other's opinions if we disagree. Sometimes, we try to understand each other through communication rather than arguing.

× ...and these conversations help us stay connected and support one another and.

✓ ...and these conversations help us stay connected and support one another.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and', which creates a sentence fragment. Removing the final 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× ...it allows me to focus on topics that we are both in genuine interested in.

✓ ...it allows me to focus on topics that we are both genuinely interested in.

The phrase 'in genuine interested in' is incorrect. The correct form is 'genuinely interested in' where 'genuinely' is an adverb modifying 'interested'. Also, the preposition 'in' should only appear once at the end.

× ...and because they are very convenient.

✓ ...because they are very convenient.

The phrase 'and because they are very convenient' is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. Removing the initial 'and' makes it a complete subordinate clause connected properly to the previous sentence.

× ...which is especially helpful when geographical barriers make face to face.

✓ ...which is especially helpful when geographical barriers make face-to-face communication difficult.

The phrase 'make face to face' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'communication difficult' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Sometimes we try to understand each other by communication rather than argue.

✓ Sometimes we try to understand each other by communicating rather than arguing.

After the preposition 'by', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form. Therefore, 'communication' should be 'communicating' and 'argue' should be 'arguing' to maintain parallel structure.