Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using clearer linking words and avoid minor grammar mistakes. Try to use linking words like "because" and "so" more effectively to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is more comfortable than talking on the phone. For example, I can take my time to reply and share pictures or videos, so our conversations become more interesting. Also, chatting helps us stay connected even when we are busy or far apart.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Try to start with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words like "for example" or "also". Avoid unclear phrases like "this interesting time and child experience" and use more natural expressions.

예시: We usually chat about our homework and lessons that we find difficult. For example, we help each other understand the topics better. Also, we sometimes share interesting stories from our childhood.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence, explain your reasons with specific details, and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid filler words like "uh" and complete your examples.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more fun and I can share my experiences with many friends. For example, in a group chat, we can joke and support each other, which makes the conversation more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and clearer linking words. Try to organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid filler words like "uh". Use linking words like "because" and "also" to improve coherence.

예시: I am an introverted person, so I prefer to communicate via social media because it feels more comfortable. Also, I find it difficult to talk face-to-face with people I don't know well.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your ideas with specific reasons. Use linking words like "if" and "because" correctly, and avoid double negatives.

예시: I don't usually argue with my close friends because we understand each other well. However, if someone argues with me, I will respond because they are not comfortable or close friends to me.

× We usually talk about our homework at school or some lessons where we don't understand and we talk about this interesting time and child experience which each other.

✓ We usually talk about our homework at school or some lessons that we don't understand, and we talk about interesting times and childhood experiences with each other.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches such as 'this interesting time' should be plural 'interesting times' and 'child experience' should be 'childhood experiences' to match the plural context. Also, 'which each other' is incorrect; it should be 'with each other' to indicate mutual sharing.

× I would prefer chat with a group of people because it's more beneficial for me to tell about my experience to uh, be funny here.

✓ I would prefer to chat with a group of people because it's more beneficial for me to talk about my experience and be funny here.

After 'would prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to chat' not just 'chat'. Also, 'tell about my experience' is better expressed as 'talk about my experience'. The phrase 'to uh, be funny here' is awkward; 'and be funny here' is clearer.

× If it's only one my friend, it would be some uncomfortable for me.

✓ If it's only one friend, it would be somewhat uncomfortable for me.

'One my friend' is incorrect; 'one friend' is correct. Also, 'some uncomfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'somewhat uncomfortable' to express degree of discomfort.

× I'm introvert person and I would prefer to communicate via social media cause of my experience.

✓ I'm an introverted person and I would prefer to communicate via social media because of my experience.

'Introvert person' should be 'an introverted person' to use the correct adjective form and article. 'Cause of' is informal and incorrect here; 'because of' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I'm so curious person, uh, in addition, I can't talk about something uh, face to face if I don't know this person.

✓ I'm a very curious person. In addition, I can't talk about something face to face if I don't know the person.

Missing article 'a' before 'very curious person'. Also, 'this person' should be 'the person' when referring to an unspecified individual in general context.

× But if they are argue with me absolutely I will argue cause of they are not comfortable friends and not close friends for me.

✓ But if they argue with me, I will definitely argue because they are not comfortable friends and not close friends to me.

'They are argue' is incorrect; it should be 'they argue' (simple present). 'Cause of' should be 'because'. Also, 'for me' is better expressed as 'to me' in this context.