Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'it's depend' instead of 'it depends'. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid filler words like 'uh', and use correct grammar. Also, be more specific about why you like chatting with friends and what you mean by 'update them from my live'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through social media because it allows me to share updates about my life and stay connected with them easily.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Avoid starting sentences with 'And'. Try to use linking words like 'usually' or 'for example' to make your answer more coherent and add specific examples.

예시: Usually, we chat about our daily lives and personal experiences. For example, when something interesting happens to me, I like to share it with my friends, and they do the same.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to give a clear and direct response with proper grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference and provide reasons.

예시: I prefer chatting with my best friends individually rather than in a group because it allows for more personal and meaningful conversations.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors such as 'prefer communicate' instead of 'prefer to communicate'. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your point about liking chatting but not long conversations.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more comfortable and allows us to understand each other's emotions better. Although I enjoy chatting online, I don't like having very long conversations that way.

제안: Your answer is honest but contains many filler words and is somewhat repetitive. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain the change and your feelings about arguing.

예시: I used to avoid arguments with my friends, but recently I have been arguing more often due to some emotional issues. However, I realize it's not right and I don't feel good about it.

× I think it's depend, uh, on that, uh, who is my friend, but I like chatting with my friends and talking to them in social media because I think I can update it.

✓ I think it depends, uh, on who my friend is, but I like chatting with my friends and talking to them on social media because I think I can update them.

The modal verb 'it's depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it depends' to agree with the third person singular subject. Also, 'on that, uh, who is my friend' is awkward; it should be 'on who my friend is' to maintain proper sentence structure. Additionally, 'in social media' should be 'on social media' because the correct preposition for platforms is 'on'. Lastly, 'update it' should be 'update them' referring to friends, which is plural.

× And usually we talk about our story or our daily life.

✓ Usually, we talk about our stories or our daily lives.

The phrase 'our story' and 'our daily life' should be pluralized to 'our stories' and 'our daily lives' to correctly refer to multiple individuals' experiences. Also, starting the sentence with 'And' is unnecessary and can be omitted for better flow.

× And we like share our life to each other.

✓ And we like sharing our lives with each other.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'sharing' rather than the base verb 'share'. Also, 'our life' should be plural 'our lives' to reflect multiple people. The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'with' is the correct preposition to indicate mutual sharing.

× I like chat with them and talk with them separately and just it, I think uh.

✓ I like chatting with them and talking with them separately, just that, I think.

After 'like', the gerund form of verbs should be used: 'chatting' and 'talking' instead of 'chat' and 'talk'. The phrase 'and just it' is awkward; 'just that' is more natural in this context.

× I prefer communicate by face to face, I think because I'm really comfortable.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I'm really comfortable.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to communicate'. The phrase 'by face to face' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'face to face' without 'by'. Also, the sentence is better without the comma before 'because'.

× Actually, I argue with my friends all the time. I didn't use to, uh, do that, but I think I have some, uh, emotional problem, but, uh, and I argue with them all the time and it's not right.

✓ Actually, I argue with my friends all the time. I didn't use to do that, but I think I have some emotional problems, and I argue with them all the time, which is not right.

The phrase 'didn't use to' is correct for past habits, but the sentence was fragmented with unnecessary fillers. 'Emotional problem' should be plural 'emotional problems' to indicate more than one issue. The conjunctions were misused; 'but, uh, and' is redundant. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correctness.