Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài và có một số phần không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó mới bổ sung chi tiết hỗ trợ. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như "natural person" và cố gắng dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

예시: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends much. When I have free time, I prefer to be alone and do hobbies like drawing or watching videos on TikTok because it helps me relax.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có sử dụng liên kết hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ như "friends" nhiều lần. Hãy cố gắng cụ thể hơn về các chủ đề bạn nói.

예시: When I chat with my friends, we usually discuss interesting stories, recent school events, and sometimes share funny incidents. This helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I can share my ideas as clearly" nên là "I can't share my ideas as clearly".

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to express my thoughts clearly. In a group, it can be overwhelming, so I can't share my ideas as well. For example, with one friend, I can focus on the topic and listen carefully.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp như "not my coffee" và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it's more convenient. Face-to-face meetings take more time and effort since you have to travel to meet someone.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "different opinions" nên là "different opinion". Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và chính xác hơn.

예시: I don't often argue with my friends, but sometimes conflicts happen. I try to avoid arguments by staying calm and understanding their opinions.

× Uh honestly I'm quite a natural person so I don't really enjoy spending a lot of time chatting with my friends.

✓ Uh honestly I'm quite a natural person so I don't really enjoy spending a lot of time chatting with my friends.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to present tense or other listed grammar problems.

× Also, when I have free time, I usually prefer to be alone and engage in hobbies like drawing or scrolling on Tiktok because it helps me relax and recharge.

✓ Also, when I have free time, I usually prefer to be alone and engage in hobbies like drawing or scrolling on TikTok because it helps me relax and recharge.

No grammatical error detected; only capitalization of 'TikTok' corrected as it is a proper noun.

× I don't usually spend a lot of time chatting with my friends, but when I do, we often talk about interesting stories or the latest news related to our school, campus life, and emotional friends.

✓ I don't usually spend a lot of time chatting with my friends, but when I do, we often talk about interesting stories or the latest news related to our school, campus life, and emotional friends.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× Sometimes we also share small dramas or funny incidents that happen recently.

✓ Sometimes we also share small dramas or funny incidents that have happened recently.

The phrase 'that happen recently' is incorrect because 'recently' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that occurred in the recent past and has relevance to the present. Using 'have happened' is appropriate here.

× This helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

✓ This helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

No grammatical error detected.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to express my thoughts and have a more personal conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to express my thoughts and have a more personal conversation.

No grammatical error detected.

× When I talk to a group, sometimes it feels overwhelming and I can share my ideas as clearly.

✓ When I talk to a group, sometimes it feels overwhelming and I can't share my ideas as clearly.

The original sentence says 'I can share my ideas as clearly' which contradicts the idea of feeling overwhelmed. The correct modal verb is 'can't' to express difficulty in sharing ideas clearly.

× For example, with one friend I can focus more on the topic and listen carefully.

✓ For example, with one friend I can focus more on the topic and listen carefully.

No grammatical error detected.

× I think I will go for communicate on social media like face.

✓ I think I will go for communicating on social media like face-to-face.

The verb 'communicate' should be in the gerund form 'communicating' after the phrase 'go for'. Also, 'like face' is unclear and should be 'like face-to-face' to express the comparison.

× Face to face communication is not my coffee and I think it's really waste time.

✓ Face-to-face communication is not my cup of tea and I think it's really a waste of time.

The idiom is 'not my cup of tea', not 'not my coffee'. Also, 'waste time' needs the article 'a' and the preposition 'of' to form 'a waste of time'.

× You need to transfer to any other local locations to just have a meet and communicate face to face like you can have it on social.

✓ You need to travel to other local places just to meet and communicate face-to-face, whereas you can do it on social media.

The verb 'transfer' is incorrect here; 'travel' is appropriate. 'Any other local locations' is awkward; 'other local places' is better. 'Have a meet' should be 'meet'. 'Like you can have it on social' is unclear; 'whereas you can do it on social media' is clearer.

× Honestly I don't really often argue with my friends, like definitely it will come sometimes like you, you will have conflict with your friends.

✓ Honestly, I don't often argue with my friends, but conflicts definitely come sometimes; like you, you will have conflicts with your friends.

The phrase 'don't really often' is awkward; 'don't often' is better. 'It will come sometimes' should be 'conflicts definitely come sometimes' to match plural 'conflicts'. 'Have conflict' should be 'have conflicts' for plural consistency.

× But I will always try to avoid conflict as much as possible and try to be nice, to be calm.

✓ But I always try to avoid conflict as much as possible and try to be nice and calm.

Using 'will always try' is future tense, but the context is habitual action, so 'always try' (present tense) is better. Also, 'to be nice, to be calm' is better expressed as 'be nice and calm'.

× And when I have a different opinions with them I will try to understand.

✓ And when I have different opinions with them, I will try to understand.

'A different opinions' is incorrect because 'opinions' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'with them' is acceptable but 'from them' or 'about them' might be clearer depending on meaning.