Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“which really amuse us”和“Strength our friendship”表达不准确。建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性，同时避免冗余，保持表达简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I often share interesting experiences and celebrity news with them, which always amuses us and strengthens our friendship.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如“strength our friendship”应为“strengthens our friendship”，句子不完整“makes me feel”后缺少内容。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免重复内容，提升表达的连贯性和准确性。

예시: I usually talk about interesting experiences and celebrity gossip with my friends. These conversations make me feel happy and help us maintain a close friendship.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“coffee shop like the libraries”表达不清晰，重复使用“quiet”。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because the atmosphere is more pleasant and quiet, which helps us focus better. I also enjoy places like coffee shops or libraries since they provide a calm environment for conversation.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“the mood on the my friends face”和句尾不完整。建议注意冠词使用，句子完整性，并避免句子冗长，保持表达清晰。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to focus better and observe my friend's facial expressions, which helps me understand their feelings and opinions more clearly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“some argue”应为“some arguments”，“it don't affect”应为“it doesn't affect”，以及表达不够自然。建议加强语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions and argue, but it doesn't affect our friendship. We feel comfortable expressing our views freely, which creates a positive atmosphere.

× For example, every evening I will share my interesting experience and some gossip of the celebrities in our country with my friends, which really amuse us and make me feel connected.

✓ For example, every evening I will share my interesting experiences and some gossip about the celebrities in our country with my friends, which really amuses us and makes me feel connected.

这里“experience”应使用复数形式“experiences”，因为指的是多次的经历；“gossip of the celebrities”应改为“gossip about the celebrities”，介词使用错误；“amuse”与“make”应与主语“which”指代的复数主语保持一致，改为“amuses”和“makes”。

× Strength our friendship.

✓ This strengthens our friendship.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整，应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× Always share some gossip of celebrities with them, which always amuses us and strength our friendship.

✓ I always share some gossip about celebrities with them, which always amuses us and strengthens our friendship.

句子缺少主语“I”，且“gossip of celebrities”应改为“gossip about celebrities”；“strength”应为动词形式“strengthens”，与主语保持一致。

× This regular communication makes me feel.

✓ This regular communication makes me feel happy.

句子缺少宾语，导致表达不完整，应补充宾语使句子完整。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think the atmosphere is pleasant and quiet that we can focus on on our conversation better.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think the atmosphere is pleasant and quiet so that we can focus on our conversation better.

“that”用法不当，应改为“so that”表示目的；“focus on on”重复，应去掉一个“on”。

× Moreover, I also like the coffee shop like the libraries where the atmosphere is quiet and it really suitable for chatting with 1 friend.

✓ Moreover, I also like coffee shops like libraries where the atmosphere is quiet and it is really suitable for chatting with one friend.

“the coffee shop like the libraries”表达不准确，应改为复数“coffee shops like libraries”；“it really suitable”缺少系动词“is”；数字“1”应写为英文单词“one”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think we can focus on our conversation better if we meet each other in person.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I think we can focus on our conversation better if we meet each other in person.

“face to face”作为形容词短语应连字符连接，改为“face-to-face”。

× Moreover, we also can see the mood on the my friends face and I can understand their thoughts and opinions either rather than their social.

✓ Moreover, we can also see the mood on my friend's face and I can understand their thoughts and opinions better than through social media.

“the my friends face”中“the”多余且“friends”应为单数所有格“friend's”；“either rather than their social”表达不清，应改为“better than through social media”。

× Sometimes we will have different opinions also on one questions, so we will have some argue, but it don't affect our friendship and we only express ourselves opinion easily and freely.

✓ Sometimes we have different opinions on one question, so we will have some arguments, but it doesn't affect our friendship and we only express our opinions easily and freely.

“one questions”应为单数“one question”；“some argue”应为名词复数“some arguments”；“don't”应为“doesn't”与主语“it”一致；“ourselves opinion”应为“our opinions”。