Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“to have a communications with my friends in order to. Face to face communication”不完整且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，表达更清晰自然。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends, but I prefer using social media because it's more convenient than face-to-face communication.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“help up stay”应为“helps us stay”，且句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

예시: I usually chat about daily life and gossip with my friends on social media because it helps us stay in touch easily, especially when meeting face-to-face is difficult.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“we sitting on the table face to face hats”不明白意思。建议简化表达，使用完整句子，并增加连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend, especially my husband. After a busy week, we enjoy cooking dinner together and talking face-to-face, which makes me feel very comfortable.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“prefer use”应为“prefer to use”，“we offering use”不正确。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，表达更自然。

예시: I usually prefer to communicate via social media because it's more convenient when we are busy. For example, we use Messenger to share updates and have quick chats about daily life.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“I'm so hard to agree with somebody else opinions”表达不清。建议使用简单句表达观点，注意时态和语法准确。

예시: Yes, I used to argue with my friends when I was young because I found it hard to agree with their opinions. However, I have changed and now I am more understanding.

× I like chatting with my friends, but I prefer to use social media umm to have a communications with my friends in order to. Face to face communication.

✓ I like chatting with my friends, but I prefer to use social media to have communication with my friends instead of face-to-face communication.

“a communications”中“communications”是不可数名词，前面不应该加不定冠词“a”，应改为“communication”。

× I usually prefer using social media to communicate with my friends because it is more convenient, sometimes difficult to make face to face, so online chatting help up stay in touch easily.

✓ I usually prefer using social media to communicate with my friends because it is more convenient. Sometimes it is difficult to have face-to-face communication, so online chatting helps us stay in touch easily.

“difficult to make face to face”表达不正确，应为“difficult to have face-to-face communication”。“help up”应为“helps us”，动词与主语不一致且代词错误。

× online chatting help up stay in touch easily.

✓ online chatting helps us stay in touch easily.

主语“online chatting”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“helps”。

× we sitting on the table face to face hats.

✓ we sit at the table face to face having a chat.

“sitting on the table”不合适，应为“sit at the table”。“hats”应为“chat”，且表达更自然。

× I usually prefer use social media to communicate with my friend because it's more convenient even we are so busy.

✓ I usually prefer to use social media to communicate with my friends because it's more convenient even when we are so busy.

“prefer use”应为“prefer to use”。“friend”应为复数“friends”。“even we are so busy”缺少连词，应为“even when we are so busy”。

× For example, we offering use Messenger app to share, update and have quick conversations like chatting about daily life or gossip.

✓ For example, we often use the Messenger app to share, update, and have quick conversations like chatting about daily life or gossip.

“offering use”错误，应为“often use”。“Messenger app”前应加定冠词“the”。

× Yes, when I was young I love to argue with my friends because I'm so hard to agree with somebody else opinions when we are having a corrections or communications.

✓ Yes, when I was young I loved to argue with my friends because I found it hard to agree with somebody else's opinions when we were having corrections or communications.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时，“love”改为“loved”。“I'm so hard to agree”表达不正确，应为“I found it hard to agree”。“somebody else opinions”应为“somebody else's opinions”。

× when we are having a corrections or communications.

✓ when we are having corrections or communications.

“a corrections”中“corrections”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。