Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Попробуйте использовать более естественные выражения и избегать грамматических ошибок, например, вместо "share our opinion on each others" скажите "share our opinions with each other". Также старайтесь делать ответы более связными и логичными.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share our opinions with each other, which makes our conversations interesting and enjoyable.

제안: Старайтесь избегать пауз и слов-паразитов, а также формулируйте свои мысли более чётко и логично. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более плавным.

예시: Usually, we chat about various topics such as our studies, fashion, interesting news, and sometimes even crime stories.

제안: Используйте правильные грамматические формы и стройте предложения более понятно. Также старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, например, укажите своё предпочтение.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because we are six classmates who enjoy sharing our thoughts and experiences together.

제안: Сформулируйте ответ более чётко и грамматически правильно, избегайте повторов и неясных выражений.

예시: Our group really prefers face-to-face communication, but we also keep in touch through social media.

제안: Расширьте ответ, добавьте причины или примеры, чтобы сделать его более содержательным и интересным.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue about various things, but it usually helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because we share our opinion on each others and it's interesting and popular in our nation.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because we share our opinions with each other and it's interesting and popular in our nation.

The phrase 'on each others' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'with each other' to indicate mutual sharing. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because multiple opinions are shared.

× Uh usual chat umm, about umm, such a kind studying such as people, uh, outfits, umm, murder and a lot of things what were interesting.

✓ Uh, usual chat, umm, about things like people, outfits, murder, and a lot of interesting things.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Such a kind studying such as people' is incorrect and confusing. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning by listing topics clearly.

× I know we tried with a group of people. We are 6 girls who is students and classmates. We love each other and we chatting a little pop packs about us about our our.

✓ I know we tried chatting with a group of people. We are 6 girls who are students and classmates. We love each other and we chat a little about ourselves.

'Who is' should be 'who are' to agree with plural '6 girls'. 'We chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'we chat'. The phrase 'pop packs about us about our our' is unclear and corrected to 'a little about ourselves' for clarity.

× Our group really like face to face communication and also we in communication we also tell media.

✓ Our group really likes face-to-face communication and also communicates via social media.

'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular 'group'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. 'We in communication we also tell media' is incorrect; corrected to 'also communicates via social media' for clarity and correct preposition use.