Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant information. Use simple, correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. We often share stories about our daily lives, which makes me happy.

제안: Your answer is brief and lacks linking words and specific details. Try to provide more information and connect your ideas logically. For example, explain why you discuss these topics or give examples.

예시: We usually chat about video games, musical instruments, and places to eat because these are our common interests. For instance, we often recommend new restaurants to each other.

제안: Your answer has unclear vocabulary and grammar mistakes. Use correct words and sentence structures to express your preference clearly. Also, explain your reason with linking words.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to focus better on the conversation and understand their thoughts more clearly.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'you know'.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows us to see each other's expressions, which makes the conversation more meaningful compared to social media.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and provide specific details or examples to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, we usually resolve our disagreements by understanding each other's points of view.

× Yes I do forget chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy chatting with my friends.

The verb 'forget' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is to express liking or enjoying chatting. The correct verb is 'enjoy' followed by the -ing form 'chatting'.

× Let me tell my wife to her and if I can't turn, uh, she, I will be happy.

✓ Let me tell my wife, and if I can't turn, she will be happy.

The sentence has unclear and incorrect pronoun usage and structure. 'Tell my wife to her' is incorrect; it should be 'tell my wife'. The phrase 'if I can't turn, uh, she, I will be happy' is confusing and needs clarification. The corrected sentence simplifies the structure and corrects pronoun use.

× We'll chat about video game playing instruments and where to eat.

✓ We'll chat about video games, playing instruments, and where to eat.

The phrase 'video game playing instruments' is unclear and likely a pluralization issue. 'Video game' should be plural 'video games' to match the context. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.

× I prefer chicken with only one friend because it can let me focus on what I'll pick up. We're talking.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps me focus on what I'll pick up while we're talking.

'Chicken' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'chatting'. The pronoun 'it' refers to 'chatting', so the sentence is corrected to reflect that. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Media, I prefer to communicate face to face because chatting in social media it was, you know, we can't see each other, but if we communicate with people, we can see each other.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when chatting on social media, we can't see each other, but if we communicate in person, we can see each other.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'social media'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I do, when all my wasn't was in the opposite side. We will argue, but we can be better if our minds end together.

✓ Yes, I do when all my opinions are on the opposite side. We argue, but we can improve if our minds come together.

The phrase 'all my wasn't was' is incorrect and unclear; it likely intends 'all my opinions are'. 'Will argue' is changed to 'argue' to match present tense used in the question. 'Be better' is vague; 'improve' is clearer. 'Minds end together' is incorrect; 'minds come together' is the correct expression.