Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用更自然的句子結構來表達。例如，避免重複使用"for"，並注意動詞時態和單複數。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often share our experiences and stories. Sometimes, they tell me about their work or dating life, which I find quite amusing.

제안: 回答中語法和用詞需要更精確，且句子結構可更流暢。建議使用連接詞使句子更連貫，並避免口語化的"like"。

예시: Most of the time, we chat about our work since we are employed in different places. We share our experiences to learn how we can improve and make changes in our jobs.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達。建議簡化句子，使用正確的時態和介詞，並避免不必要的重複。

예시: Usually, I prefer chatting with groups because I have many friends to talk and hang out with. However, recently I practice English by chatting one-on-one face to face, which helps me improve.

제안: 你的回答內容豐富，但有些語法錯誤和用詞不當。建議注意動詞時態一致性，並使用更準確的詞彙，如"interaction"而非"interactor"。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to notice not only the words but also the emotions and body language of the other person, making the interaction more genuine and meaningful. For example, physical touch and facial expressions help us understand feelings better.

제안: 回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤多。建議簡化句子，明確表達意見，並避免重複。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my colleagues. When that happens, I talk to my friends and share my experiences. For example, once my colleague blamed me for not doing anything, which made me feel awkward, so I discussed it with my friends.

× I like to share my experience for my friend and also I like to listen to their story.

✓ I like to share my experience with my friends and also I like to listen to their stories.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate sharing something with someone is 'with'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'their'.

× Like sometimes they might share their experience for working or for having date with their boyfriend.

✓ Sometimes they might share their experience about working or having a date with their boyfriend.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used. The correct preposition to indicate the topic of experience is 'about'. Also, 'having date' should be 'having a date' to be grammatically correct.

× It's really funny for it.

✓ It's really funny.

The phrase 'for it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence is complete and correct without it.

× we are working in different place in the different parts.

✓ we are working in different places in different parts.

The noun 'place' should be plural 'places' to agree with 'different'. Also, 'the different parts' should be 'different parts' without 'the'.

× So we would like to share our experience and see like how can we change and what can we improve for our job.

✓ So we would like to share our experiences and see how we can change and what we can improve in our jobs.

'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'we'. The word order in the question part is incorrect; it should be 'how we can' not 'how can we'. Also, 'for our job' should be 'in our jobs'.

× I would like to chat with the groups because we have a lot of friends that we can play it together and chat together.

✓ I would like to chat with groups because we have a lot of friends that we can play and chat with together.

'The groups' should be 'groups' without 'the' because it is general. 'Play it together' is incorrect; 'play and chat with together' is better. Also, 'chat together' is better expressed as 'chat with together'.

× I'm practices my English so I often invite someone to 1 by 1 then came out with me then we can chat it face to face that would be more helpful for my English.

✓ I'm practicing my English so I often invite someone one by one to come out with me so we can chat face to face; that would be more helpful for my English.

'Practices' should be 'practicing' (present participle). '1 by 1' should be 'one by one'. 'Came out' should be 'come out'. 'Chat it' is incorrect; just 'chat' is correct. 'Helpful for my English' is acceptable but 'helpful to my English' is also possible.

× I prefer face to face communication because it was allow us to notice not only the words but also emotion and body languages of the other person, which is make interactor more general and meaningful.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to notice not only the words but also the emotions and body language of the other person, which makes interaction more natural and meaningful.

'Was allow' is incorrect; it should be 'allows' (present tense). 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'Body languages' should be 'body language' (uncountable). 'Is make' should be 'makes'. 'Interactor' is incorrect; 'interaction' is the correct noun. 'More general' is unclear; 'more natural' fits better.

× physical touch and facial experience can help us understand feelings better.

✓ Physical touch and facial expressions can help us understand feelings better.

'Facial experience' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'.

× I will share with my friends and share something for my experience.

✓ I will share with my friends and share something from my experience.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'from' is the correct preposition to indicate the source of something.

× last time I didn't do anything but my colleague just told me you should do that and you should do that and let me feel like awkward so I will just talk with.

✓ Last time I didn't do anything but my colleague just told me you should do this and you should do that, which made me feel awkward, so I just talked with them.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Let me feel like awkward' should be 'made me feel awkward'. 'I will just talk with' is incomplete and should be 'I just talked with them' to match past tense context.