Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repeating words and keep your answer concise and clear. Use a topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by a supporting detail with a linking phrase.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it is interesting and allows us to share our thoughts openly.

제안: Be more specific and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide clear examples.

예시: I usually chat about our daily routines and work, and we often share our opinions on various topics to stay connected.

제안: Make sure your answer is clear and grammatically correct. Provide a reason using linking words to explain your preference.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows us to have a deeper and more meaningful conversation.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to compare both options and express your comfort level clearly.

예시: I like to communicate both face-to-face and via social media because each method has its own advantages, and I feel comfortable using both.

제안: Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Explain the reasons for arguments with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue over specific topics because we have different opinions, but we always try to understand each other's point of view.

× Yes, I like like chatting with friends which is very interesting and we can share our thoughts with each other.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because it is very interesting and we can share our thoughts with each other.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'like like' which is incorrect. Also, 'which is very interesting' should be connected properly to the main clause. Using 'because it is very interesting' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually chat about friends, about daily work, daily routines and share our thoughts with each other.

✓ I usually chat about daily work, daily routines, and share our thoughts with each other.

The phrase 'chat about friends' is incorrect because we don't usually chat about friends themselves; rather, we chat with friends or about topics. Removing 'about friends' corrects the prepositional usage.

× I want to chat only with one friend because in this weekend share our thoughts with each other.

✓ I want to chat only with one friend because this weekend I want to share our thoughts with each other.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb in the second clause, making it incomplete. Adding 'I want to' before 'share' completes the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× I want to communicate with both with face to face and and chatting. I comfortable with both side.

✓ I want to communicate both face-to-face and by chatting. I am comfortable with both sides.

The phrase 'with both with face to face and and chatting' is incorrect due to redundant prepositions and repeated words. Also, 'I comfortable' lacks the verb 'am'. Correcting prepositions and adding the verb improves grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, we argue with friends on some specific reason and specific topics and we put our our sides.

✓ Yes, we argue with friends for some specific reasons and specific topics, and we present our sides.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'reason'; 'for' is appropriate. Also, 'put our our sides' is unclear; 'present our sides' is a better expression. Removing repeated words and correcting prepositions improves clarity.