Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'chat' multiple times and improve sentence structure for better clarity. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I absolutely enjoy chatting with my friends because I find it more convenient than calling. We often chat for study purposes as well as to keep in touch.

제안: Your answer needs better structure and clearer linking. Avoid repeating 'chatting' unnecessarily and improve grammar, such as 'help me understand' instead of 'help me understanding'. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas.

예시: I usually discuss study-related topics with my friends because it helps me understand things better. Also, we chat to stay connected since it's more convenient than calling.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid vague phrases like 'inappropriate information towards other'. Also, try to use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because group chats can be distracting and sometimes lead to misunderstandings. I like to talk to someone who is close to my heart.

제안: Your answer needs better coherence and grammar. Avoid starting sentences with 'Whereas' repeatedly. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to explain reasons. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps build better interpersonal relationships. Social media can sometimes spread false information, which may cause conflicts later.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to explain reasons for arguments and keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about assignments. However, I try to avoid unnecessary arguments because I value our friendship.

× Yes absolutely, I love chatting with my friends since I don't like to call but I love to chat as we sometime do chat to for study purposes and for communication.

✓ Yes absolutely, I love chatting with my friends since I don't like to call but I love to chat as we sometimes chat for study purposes and for communication.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to correctly indicate frequency. Also, 'do chat to for' is incorrect; it should be 'chat for' without 'do' and 'to'. The verb 'chat' is used correctly here without '-ing' after 'do'.

× I usually discuss study related topics which help me understanding things better as well as sometimes I do chatting with my friends to stay connected as chatting are more convenient than calling so that's why I do chat.

✓ I usually discuss study-related topics which help me understand things better, and sometimes I chat with my friends to stay connected as chatting is more convenient than calling, so that's why I chat.

The phrase 'help me understanding' is incorrect; it should be 'help me understand' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb. 'Do chatting' is incorrect; 'chat' is the correct verb form. 'Chatting are' should be 'chatting is' because 'chatting' is singular. Also, 'study related' should be hyphenated as 'study-related'.

× I prefer to chat with only one person because chatting with another persons can leads to disturbance and inappropriate information towards other.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because chatting with other persons can lead to disturbance and inappropriate information towards others.

'Another persons' is incorrect; 'another' is used with singular nouns, so it should be 'other persons' for plural. 'Can leads' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' is followed by base verb 'lead'. 'Towards other' should be 'towards others' to match plural form.

× I preferably wants to chat with only one person who is close to my heart.

✓ I preferably want to chat with only one person who is close to my heart.

'I' is first person singular and should be followed by 'want' not 'wants'. 'Wants' is used with third person singular subjects.

× I prefer to communicate face to face not by social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, not via social media.

'By social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'via' when referring to communication through a medium.

× Whereas communicating face to face develops interpersonal relationship good.

✓ Communicating face to face develops good interpersonal relationships.

'Whereas' is used incorrectly at the beginning; the sentence is a statement, not a contrast. 'Interpersonal relationship good' is incorrect word order; it should be 'good interpersonal relationships'.

× Whereas social media sometimes leads to false information towards another person which is in future leads to fight.

✓ Social media sometimes leads to false information about another person, which in the future leads to fights.

'Leads to false information towards another person' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about'. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'Leads to fight' should be plural 'fights'.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends when there is no same feeling or any assignments which are doing that he's saying right and I am saying that is wrong.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends when we do not share the same feelings or when we have assignments where he says he is right and I say I am wrong.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'No same feeling' should be 'do not share the same feelings'. 'Assignments which are doing that' is unclear; rephrased to 'assignments where'. 'He's saying right' should be 'he says he is right'. 'I am saying that is wrong' should be 'I say I am wrong'.

× Then I sometimes argue with my friends whereas I'm a good person, I don't argue with anyone.

✓ Then I sometimes argue with my friends, but I'm a good person and I don't argue with anyone.

'Whereas' is used incorrectly here; 'but' is the correct conjunction to show contrast. Also, the sentence needs a comma before the conjunction for clarity.