Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more clear and natural by avoiding repetition and using simple, correct phrases. For example, say 'I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and enjoy my time.'

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and enjoy my free time.

제안: Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and be more specific. For example, start with the main topics and then add examples using words like 'for example' or 'also'.

예시: We usually chat about our daily lives and work. For example, we talk about our jobs, future plans, and sometimes share funny stories or ask how each other's day was.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: I prefer to chat with only one friend because group chats can be confusing with many different opinions. Talking to one friend helps me focus and feel more comfortable.

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons clearly.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can talk about many things, enjoy time together, and share memories from school and college.

제안: Try to use correct words and clear sentences. Avoid repeating words and explain your answer logically using linking words like 'because' or 'if'.

예시: Yes, I argue with my friends when they are wrong because I care about them. We sometimes tease each other, but if I am wrong, they also correct me.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because of because of them I made my mind relaxed so to the legs and chill so we can talk to our friends and I used to talk to with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because of them. It relaxes my mind and helps me to rest and chill. We can talk to our friends, and I usually talk with my friends.

The phrase 'because of because of them' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Made my mind relaxed' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it relaxes my mind'. 'So to the legs and chill' is unclear and should be 'helps me to rest and chill'. Also, 'talk to with my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'talk with my friends'. The prepositions 'to' and 'with' were misused here.

× We usually chat about the things that are going to life and what we are working on it and where, what we want to be working in future and lighter and like funny things like how's your day those and like that.

✓ We usually chat about things happening in life, what we are working on, where we want to work in the future, and lighter, funny things like 'How's your day?' and things like that.

The phrase 'things that are going to life' is incorrect; it should be 'things happening in life'. 'Working on it and where' is unclear; it should be 'what we are working on, where'. 'What we want to be working in future' needs the article 'the' before 'future'. 'Lighter and like funny things' is awkward; it should be 'lighter, funny things'. The prepositions and sentence structure were incorrect.

× I do prefer to chat with a with only one friend with us in Group of chats with different points of view different of different peoples will make the mind blow.

✓ I do prefer to chat with only one friend because group chats with different points of view and different people can be overwhelming.

The phrase 'different of different peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural and does not take 's'. Also, 'make the mind blow' should be 'can be overwhelming' or 'blow your mind'. The singular/plural forms and word choice were incorrect.

× So I think chat with only one friend with with one friend will going to help you out in the whole day.

✓ So I think chatting with only one friend will help you throughout the day.

The phrase 'chat with only one friend with with one friend' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Will going to help' is incorrect; it should be 'will help'. 'Help you out in the whole day' is better expressed as 'help you throughout the day'. The prepositions and verb forms were misused.

× I really prefer to meet face to face as we talk about the different things and the how work is going and how worth life is going to be balanced and and enjoy some time with friends and talk about past things like how we used to spend our days in our schools and colleges.

✓ I really prefer to meet face to face because we can talk about different things, how work is going, how life is balanced, enjoy time with friends, and talk about past experiences like how we used to spend our days in school and college.

The phrase 'the how work is going' is incorrect; 'how work is going' is sufficient. 'How worth life is going to be balanced' is unclear and should be 'how life is balanced'. 'Schools and colleges' is better than 'our schools and colleges' unless specifying. The prepositions and sentence structure were incorrect.

× Yes I argue with fan when he was wronged in at at the point when he's wrong so I argue with them and threat him because he's my brain he's my friend and I care about him.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends when they are wrong. At that point, I argue with them and threaten them because they are my friends and I care about them.

'Fan' is likely a typo for 'friend'. 'He was wronged' is incorrect; it should be 'he is wrong'. 'Threat him' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'threaten'. Pronouns were inconsistent and incorrect; singular and plural forms were mixed up. 'He's my brain' is likely a mistake for 'he's my friend'.

× So I used to argue with them to threat him and if I am wrong he also threatened me.

✓ So I used to argue with them and threaten them, and if I am wrong, they also threaten me.

'Threat' is a noun; the verb form is 'threaten'. Pronouns were inconsistent; 'them' and 'him' were mixed incorrectly. Also, verb tense consistency is needed: 'threatened' should be 'threaten' to match present tense 'am wrong'. The pronouns and verb forms were incorrect.