Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and make your answer more concise and natural. For example, instead of repeating 'chat with my friends,' say it once and add a reason or detail to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time because it helps me relax and stay connected.

제안: Provide more specific details and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, mention particular topics or reasons why you discuss study and work.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our studies and work, especially sharing tips on assignments and discussing upcoming projects.

제안: Avoid vague answers like 'Yes' when the question asks for a preference. Clearly state your preference and explain it with specific reasons using linking words.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows us to share ideas about study and work more deeply, although group chats can be fun for socializing.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, be concise and specific.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to see facial expressions and better understand each other's thoughts, which is harder through social media.

제안: Expand your answer slightly to make it more natural and provide a brief reason or explanation.

예시: No, I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I value our relationship and prefer to resolve disagreements calmly.

× Yes, I like to chat with my friends when I am free, then I spend a lot of time with chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends when I am free, then I spend a lot of time chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'spend a lot of time with chatting' is incorrect because after 'spend time', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'with'. The correct form is 'spend a lot of time chatting'. This is a common structure in English where 'spend time' is followed directly by a gerund.

× I usually chat with my friends about the study and the work.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about study and work.

The use of the definite article 'the' before 'study' and 'work' is unnecessary here because these are general activities, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people or only the one friend.

✓ Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people or just one friend.

The phrase 'only the one friend' is awkward and incorrect. 'Just one friend' is the correct and natural way to express this idea. Also, 'only' should be placed before 'one friend' if used, but 'just' is more appropriate here.

× I prefer to communicate face to face as compared to via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

The phrase 'as compared to via social media' is awkward and incorrect. The correct comparative phrase is 'rather than via social media'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective, but as an adverbial phrase it is acceptable as is.

× If we talk about a communicator face to face, we can discuss about the thoughts and we can see the facial expressions and we can learn a different kind of activities so that.

✓ If we talk face to face, we can discuss our thoughts, see facial expressions, and learn about different kinds of activities.

Several preposition errors here: 'talk about a communicator face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talk face to face'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'Learn a different kind of activities' is incorrect; it should be 'learn about different kinds of activities'. The sentence is also simplified for clarity and correctness.