Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Can put my feet up and light my hair down”表达不完整且不自然。建议使用完整句子，避免口语化的片段，并且注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a busy day at school. I am an extroverted person, so talking with friends makes me feel happy and less stressed.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够流畅，且“close videos”用词不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually chat with my best friend about fashion trends in our country because we enjoy watching short videos on social media for new ideas. Besides that, we often discuss our studies since we are classmates.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer talk”应为“prefer to talk”，“only one people”应为“only one person”，以及“exchange my dears”表达不准确。建议注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

예시: I prefer to talk with only one person rather than a group because I am introverted. Talking one-on-one allows me to express my thoughts more openly and share my ideas more easily.

제안: 回答较好，但“conservation”应为“conversation”，“body languages”应为“body language”。建议注意单复数和拼写错误，提升表达准确性。

예시: Frankly speaking, I prefer to chat with people face to face rather than via social media because face-to-face conversation helps me understand others' emotions through their body language and facial expressions.

제안: 回答内容合理，但句子结构略显断裂，如“Although sometimes we have disagreements.”是个不完整句。建议将句子合并，使表达更连贯。

예시: I'm afraid I don't argue with friends often, although sometimes we have disagreements. From my perspective, it's normal for friends to have different opinions about food, clothes, and other small things in life.

× Definitely because I am currently a student with a heavy workload so I always feel a little stressed talking with my friend.

✓ Definitely, because I am currently a student with a heavy workload, so I always feel a little stressed when talking with my friends.

这里需要在“stressed”和“talking”之间加上连词“when”，表示“当……时”，使句子结构完整，符合英语习惯。并且“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为通常是和多个朋友聊天。

× Definitely because I am currently a student with a heavy workload so I always feel a little stressed talking with my friend.

✓ Definitely, because I am currently a student with a heavy workload, so I always feel a little stressed talking with my friends.

“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，因为通常是和多个朋友聊天，单数形式不符合语境。

× Can put my feet up and light my hair down.

✓ I can put my feet up and let my hair down.

原句缺少主语“I”，且“light my hair down”应为固定表达“let my hair down”，表示放松。需要补充主语并使用正确短语。

× Firstly, I always talk about clothing style in our country with my best friend because we both like scrolling through some close videos on social media to get fresh inspiration.

✓ Firstly, I always talk about clothing styles in our country with my best friend because we both like scrolling through some close videos on social media to get fresh inspiration.

“clothing style”应使用复数形式“clothing styles”，表示多种服装风格，更符合语境。

× Firstly, I always talk about clothing style in our country with my best friend because we both like scrolling through some close videos on social media to get fresh inspiration.

✓ Firstly, I always talk about clothing styles in our country with my best friend because we both like scrolling through some close videos on social media for fresh inspiration.

“to get fresh inspiration”改为“for fresh inspiration”更符合习惯用法，表示“为了获得灵感”。

× What's more, we always talk about our study because we are classmates.

✓ What's more, we always talk about our studies because we are classmates.

“study”应使用复数形式“studies”，表示学习的各个方面。

× I prefer talk with only one people rather than a group because I'm an introverted person, so if I talk with just one person I can express my thoughts more openly and exchange my dears with others more easily.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one person rather than a group because I'm an introverted person, so if I talk with just one person I can express my thoughts more openly and exchange my ideas with others more easily.

“prefer talk”应为“prefer to talk”，动词后需加不定式；“people”应为单数“person”；“dears”应为“ideas”，原词用错。

× Frankly speaking, I prefer to chat with people face to face rather than via social media because face to face conservation allows me to better understand other people's emotions through their body languages and facial expressions.

✓ Frankly speaking, I prefer to chat with people face to face rather than via social media because face-to-face conversation allows me to better understand other people's emotions through their body language and facial expressions.

“face to face”作为形容词时应连字符连接为“face-to-face”；“conservation”应为“conversation”；“body languages”应为不可数名词“body language”。

× Although sometimes we have disagreements.

✓ Although sometimes we have disagreements,

“Although”引导的从句不能单独成句，需与主句连用，原句缺少主句，需补充或改写。

× From my perspective, it's a common phenomenon that people and their friends have different ideas about eating, clothes and any other little things in life.

✓ From my perspective, it's a common phenomenon that people and their friends have different ideas about eating, clothing, and other little things in life.

“clothes”应改为“clothing”，表示“穿着”更符合语境；“any other”改为“other”更自然；逗号使用更规范。