Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid repeating the question and reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, work on sentence clarity and grammar to make your ideas easier to understand.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. Talking with others also improves my communication skills and strengthens our relationships.

제안: Focus on organizing your answer with clear topics and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Try to be more specific and concise when listing topics you discuss with friends.

예시: We usually chat about various topics such as sports, travel plans, our relationships, politics, and weekend activities. For example, last week we discussed a football match and our plans for a trip next month.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Also, try to avoid grammatical errors and be more concise.

예시: I prefer both depending on the situation. For private or emotional topics, I talk to a close friend. However, for general subjects like sports or travel plans, I enjoy chatting with a group of friends.

제안: Try to give a clear preference and explain your reasons logically. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to stay in touch with friends who live far away. However, I also value face-to-face conversations for more personal interactions.

제안: Work on expressing your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically. Also, try to complete your sentences fully to convey your message effectively.

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because we have different opinions and values. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

× I think no one can alone leave he or she have to talk to her, have to speak one someone.

✓ I think no one can live alone; he or she has to talk to someone.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'Leave' should be 'live' to convey living alone. 'He or she have' should be 'he or she has' to agree in number and person. 'Have to talk to her' is incorrect; it should be 'has to talk to someone' to generalize the subject. The phrase 'have to speak one someone' is incorrect and replaced with 'has to talk to someone' for clarity.

× It's helps everyone to improve their uh.

✓ It helps everyone to improve themselves.

'It's helps' is incorrect; 'It helps' is correct because 'it' is singular and does not need the auxiliary 'is'. Also, 'their' is plural, but the subject is singular 'everyone', so 'themselves' is the correct reflexive pronoun to match 'everyone'.

× Actually kinds of uh, very moral more or more, umm, we talk about sports, we talk about traveling is, uh, traveling to somewhere.

✓ Actually, we talk about many kinds of things, mostly about sports and traveling to somewhere.

The phrase 'kinds of uh, very moral more or more' is unclear and incorrect. 'Many kinds of things' is a correct quantifier phrase. 'Traveling is, uh, traveling to somewhere' is redundant and awkward; simplified to 'traveling to somewhere'.

× We talk about uh, uh, each of their girlfriends.

✓ We talk about each other's girlfriends.

'Each of their girlfriends' is incorrect because 'each' should be followed by a singular possessive or reflexive pronoun. 'Each other's girlfriends' correctly expresses mutual possession among friends.

× You talk about the politics, we talk about their, the uh, uh, what will the will do in one weekend?

✓ We talk about politics and what we will do on the weekend.

'You talk about the politics' is inconsistent with the rest of the sentence; 'we talk about politics' is consistent. 'Their, the uh, uh, what will the will do in one weekend?' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'what we will do on the weekend' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Actually I prefer both because it's different kinds of when you want to share a very private things on your or very inner topic in your emotional, you have to go with your own friend.

✓ Actually, I prefer both because they are different kinds. When you want to share very private things or very personal emotional topics, you have to go with your own friend.

'It's different kinds' is incorrect; 'they are different kinds' agrees in number. 'A very private things' mixes singular and plural; corrected to 'very private things'. 'On your or very inner topic in your emotional' is unclear and corrected to 'very personal emotional topics' for clarity.

× But when you comes to the point is kind of like sports or traveling plan or politics in our country, then you go to your group of friend.

✓ But when you come to the point, it is kind of like sports, travel plans, or politics in our country, then you go to your group of friends.

'You comes' is incorrect; 'you come' is correct for second person singular/plural. 'Traveling plan' should be pluralized to 'travel plans'. 'Group of friend' should be 'group of friends' to agree in number.

× Actually I prefer both.

✓ Actually, I prefer both.

Added a comma after 'Actually' for correct punctuation and natural speech flow.

× Actually, uh, firstly I save both, but if you uh, firstly asked me which one is best, I hopefully obviously said, uh, by social media, not face to face.

✓ Actually, I like both, but if you first asked me which one is best, I would obviously say social media, not face to face.

'I save both' is incorrect; 'I like both' is appropriate. 'Firstly asked me' should be 'first asked me' or 'if you asked me first'. 'I hopefully obviously said' is awkward; corrected to 'I would obviously say' to express conditional and future in past.

× Look, when I say uh, both, when your friend, uh, is far away from you, then it's very important.

✓ Look, when I say both, if your friend is far away from you, then it's very important.

'When your friend' is better as 'if your friend' to express condition. Removed unnecessary filler words for clarity.

× Of course, always because I think the argument is the second born bonding with friends, because every friends has their own own demands or own moralities.

✓ Of course, always, because I think arguments are the second bond born with friends, since every friend has their own demands or moralities.

'The argument is the second born bonding' is awkward; corrected to 'arguments are the second bond born'. 'Every friends' is incorrect; 'every friend' is singular. 'Own own' is redundant; corrected to single 'own'.

× So yes, I argue with my friends. It's it's it's actually it's increased our love and.

✓ So yes, I argue with my friends. It has actually increased our love and understanding.

Repeated 'it's' is an error; corrected to 'It has actually increased'. Added 'understanding' to complete the thought and make the sentence meaningful.