Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être plus naturelle et concise. Évitez les répétitions et améliorez la fluidité en reformulant certaines parties.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through apps like Telegram and Instagram, but I prefer talking to them face-to-face.

제안: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Utilisez des phrases plus simples et des mots précis, et organisez vos idées avec des mots de liaison.

예시: Most of the time, we talk about our activities and future plans. For example, we discuss where to hang out, like going to the computer club to play games and relax.

제안: Faites attention à la grammaire et à la clarté. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus fluide et évitez les erreurs comme "come in in".

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because we can plan activities together, like going out or visiting the computer club to play games and relax.

제안: Corrigez les erreurs grammaticales et améliorez la fluidité en utilisant des expressions plus naturelles et des mots de liaison.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to share ideas more effectively and enjoy our time together.

제안: Votre réponse est un peu confuse. Organisez vos idées clairement et utilisez des phrases complètes avec des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially about topics like football, where we debate which player is better based on their achievements.

× I like chatting with my friends in programs such as Telegram, Instagram, but I prefer to speak with them in the real life.

✓ I like chatting with my friends on programs such as Telegram and Instagram, but I prefer to speak with them in real life.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using applications or programs; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'in the real life' should be 'in real life' without 'the'.

× Our majority time we prefer to speak about our actions, what we will do in the future, for example, about our plans.

✓ Most of the time, we prefer to talk about our actions and what we will do in the future, for example, our plans.

The phrase 'Our majority time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'Most of the time'. Also, 'speak about' is better replaced with 'talk about' for naturalness.

× Or we can hang out with them, go to the computer club, spend time there and that's all.

✓ We can also hang out with them, go to the computer club, spend time there, and that's all.

Starting a sentence with 'Or' is not appropriate here; 'also' fits better to add information. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list.

× I prefer to chat with group of people because we can discuss our upcoming plans such as going out together or visiting the come in in the computer club, playing games and relax.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because we can discuss our upcoming plans such as going out together or visiting the computer club, playing games, and relaxing.

The phrase 'with group of people' needs the article 'a' before 'group'. 'Come in in' is a typo and should be removed. Also, 'relax' should be in the gerund form 'relaxing' to match the parallel structure.

× I prefer to communicate with people face to face because it's allows us to share ideas in real life, talk about our actions, and spend our time more enjoyable and fascinating.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people face to face because it allows us to share ideas in real life, talk about our actions, and spend our time more enjoyably and fascinatingly.

'It's allows' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'more enjoyable and fascinating' modifies 'time' which is a noun, so the adverbs 'enjoyably' and 'fascinatingly' are more appropriate.

× If it's topic about, for example football, football players who can argue about who is better and who have interesting achievements in his career.

✓ If it's a topic about, for example, football, football players can argue about who is better and who has interesting achievements in their careers.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'topic'. 'Who have' should be 'who has' to agree with singular 'who'. Also, 'his career' should be 'their careers' to agree with plural 'football players'.