Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat repetitive. Try to be more concise and natural by directly answering the question first, then briefly explaining your preference. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing.

예시: Yes, I prefer chatting online because I am introverted and feel more comfortable communicating that way than face-to-face.

제안: Good content and structure, but watch for minor grammar mistakes and improve linking words for smoother flow. Also, avoid repeating words like 'and' consecutively.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about stocks and investments because I am interested in finance and want to learn from their experiences. For instance, we discuss which companies we have invested in and share advice on market trends. Additionally, I talk with another group about hobbies like Japanese animation, which helps me relax after work.

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, correct small grammar errors for better clarity.

예시: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel comfortable expressing my feelings without judgment. In contrast, groups often have many different opinions, which can be overwhelming.

제안: Avoid saying you already answered the question; instead, restate your preference clearly. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use natural expressions.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I am introverted and feel more comfortable chatting online than having face-to-face interactions.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid confusing phrases. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: Usually, I don't argue with my friends. However, sometimes we have different opinions about topics like novels, anime, and finance, but we discuss them respectfully.

× Yes actually I enjoy chatting online rather than having a facial interaction with anybody as I have kind of introverted and reserved personality and I prefer being avoidant with other people instead of just connecting with them on a daily basis or having a face to face conversation.

✓ Yes, actually I enjoy chatting online rather than having face-to-face interaction with anybody as I have a kind of introverted and reserved personality and I prefer being avoidant with other people instead of just connecting with them on a daily basis or having face-to-face conversations.

The phrase 'facial interaction' is incorrect; the correct term is 'face-to-face interaction'. Also, 'a kind of introverted and reserved personality' needs the article 'a' before 'kind'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective before a noun. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, we often discuss which companies we have invested and and share advice on market trend.

✓ For example, we often discuss which companies we have invested in and share advice on market trends.

The verb 'invested' requires the preposition 'in' to complete the phrase 'invested in companies'. Also, 'market trend' should be plural 'market trends' because advice is usually given on multiple trends. These changes correct prepositional and pluralization errors.

× I prefer to chat with my one friend that I feel comfortable with, who I can express my feelings without getting judged, rather a group.

✓ I prefer to chat with my one friend whom I feel comfortable with, and with whom I can express my feelings without getting judged, rather than a group.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'whom' when referring to a person as the object of a preposition. Also, 'rather a group' is incomplete; it should be 'rather than a group' to correctly express preference. Adding 'and with whom' clarifies the sentence structure.

× I think I've already answered this question through my previous answer. As ever, introverted and avoiding personality. I prefer being reserved and chatting through social media rather than having a facial interactions.

✓ I think I've already answered this question in my previous answer. As ever, I have an introverted and avoidant personality. I prefer being reserved and chatting through social media rather than having face-to-face interactions.

The phrase 'through my previous answer' is better expressed as 'in my previous answer'. 'Avoiding personality' is incorrect; the adjective 'avoidant' should be used. 'Facial interactions' is incorrect; the correct term is 'face-to-face interactions'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Usually no, I never argue with my friends though we our friend group actually have device about certain things as such as novels, animes and other opinions classes between us as we usually talk about different things such as finances, stock, animes, novels, man was they are all.

✓ Usually no, I never argue with my friends, though our friend group actually has disagreements about certain things such as novels, animes, and other opinions among us, as we usually talk about different topics such as finances, stocks, animes, and novels.

The original sentence has multiple structural and word choice errors: 'we our friend group' should be 'our friend group'; 'have device' should be 'has disagreements'; 'as such as' is redundant, use 'such as'; 'opinions classes' is unclear, replaced with 'opinions among us'; 'stock' should be plural 'stocks'; 'man was they are all' is unclear and removed. These corrections improve clarity, grammar, and coherence.