Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answerが少し不自然で冗長です。"setting"の意味が不明瞭で、"passive means of expressing your thought"の繰り返しも避けましょう。より簡潔で明確に、自分の好みを述べることが大切です。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends, but I prefer talking directly through video calls because it feels more personal and allows me to share my feelings better.

제안: 文が不明瞭で繰り返しや言い間違いが多いです。質問に対して直接答え、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話すことも重要です。

예시: Usually, we chat about when and where to meet for meals. Sometimes, we also discuss problems and try to find solutions together.

제안: 内容は伝わりますが、"No"で始めるのは避け、肯定文で答えましょう。また、冗長な表現を減らし、接続詞で文をつなげると自然になります。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend at a time because group chats can be confusing and boring with many people replying at once.

제안: 文法ミスや不自然な表現が多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。不要な言い間違いは避けてください。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I like direct interaction. However, if meeting is not possible, I use social media as an alternative.

제안: 答えが少し混乱していて、文法的にも不自然です。簡潔に自分の意見を述べ、具体的な理由や状況を付け加えると良いでしょう。

예시: I rarely argue with my friends. But if I disagree strongly, I express my opinion clearly and stand my ground.

× Yes, I do like setting, but even I'd prefer talking rather than chatting because it's uh, quite, uh, passive means of passive means of expressing your thought.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting, but I prefer talking rather than chatting because it's quite a passive means of expressing your thoughts.

The word 'setting' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form related to the context is 'chatting'. Also, 'means' should be singular 'a means' because it refers to one method. 'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match the general idea of expressing multiple thoughts.

× So I like to do direct video call to my friends to share about my feelings.

✓ So I like to make direct video calls to my friends to share my feelings.

The phrase 'do direct video call' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make direct video calls'. Also, 'share about my feelings' should be 'share my feelings' because 'share' does not require 'about'.

× The often, while you often said, we said about the meeting, whichever, when we'll meet, uh, we'll fix the date and and the place location where we can have some food while on, on other time we can share about the problem and get a solution.

✓ Often, we talk about meetings, like when we'll meet. We fix the date and the place where we can have some food. At other times, we share problems and find solutions.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs to be broken into clearer sentences with proper word order and conjunctions. 'Whichever' is incorrect here; 'like' or 'such as' is better. 'Share about the problem' should be 'share problems' or 'talk about problems'.

× No, I prefer to chat with only one friend at a time and I do not like the concept of group chatting.

✓ No, I prefer to chat with only one friend at a time, and I do not like the concept of group chatting.

This sentence is mostly correct; a comma before 'and' improves clarity. No major grammar problem here.

× Even I do like to do direct call to my phone but I'm not into the group chatting because it's quite tedious and all the people are replying in messages.

✓ I also like to make direct calls on my phone, but I'm not into group chatting because it's quite tedious and everyone replies with messages.

'Even I do like to do direct call to my phone' is awkward; 'I also like to make direct calls on my phone' is better. 'All the people are replying in messages' should be 'everyone replies with messages' for natural expression.

× I find it confusing and so boring to me.

✓ I find it confusing and boring.

'So boring to me' is redundant because 'I find it boring' already expresses the opinion. Simplifying improves clarity.

× If there is a possibility of committing face to face, that is the best option for me.

✓ If there is a possibility of meeting face to face, that is the best option for me.

'Committing face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'meeting face to face'.

× Umm, I'm the person who like to deal directly.

✓ Umm, I'm the person who likes to deal directly.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'who' refers to 'person' (singular), so the verb should be 'likes' not 'like'.

× Uh, if there what when their condition are not suitable to meet, meet up.

✓ If their condition is not suitable for meeting up,

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be simplified to 'If their condition is not suitable for meeting up,' with correct subject-verb agreement and prepositions.

× MMM social media is quite favorable and quite.

✓ Social media is quite favorable then.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'then' or completing the thought improves clarity.

× I barely argue with friends.

✓ I rarely argue with friends.

'Barely' means 'almost not at all' but is not typically used with 'argue'. 'Rarely' is the correct adverb to express infrequency.

× Uh, if there is a matter of such circumstance, I should directly reject and argue with them and then I do not step down.

✓ If such a situation arises, I directly reject and argue with them, and I do not back down.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Matter of such circumstance' should be 'such a situation'. 'Do not step down' is better expressed as 'do not back down'.

× Yes, it's my quite duty to do so, but there is very rare cases of I'm having arguing with my friend.

✓ Yes, it's quite my duty to do so, but there are very rare cases where I argue with my friends.

'My quite duty' should be 'quite my duty'. 'There is very rare cases' should be 'there are very rare cases' (plural agreement). 'I'm having arguing' is incorrect; 'I argue' is correct.